英语作文改错 急老师让帮同学改作文 不会 求高手 最好带理由 求救啊 有多少算多少 谢谢!Dear David Howare you doing?I have had a good time in this summer.I had visited the Taishanwith my classmates that is the highest

英语作文改错 急老师让帮同学改作文 不会 求高手 最好带理由 求救啊 有多少算多少 谢谢!Dear David Howare you doing?I have had a good time in this summer.I had visited the Taishanwith my classmates that is the highest
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老师让帮同学改作文 不会 求高手 最好带理由 求救啊 有多少算多少 谢谢!
Dear David
Howare you doing?I have had a good time in this summer.I had visited the Taishanwith my classmates that is the highest mountain in Shandong Province.
Wearrived the bottom of the Taishan with told many jokes.The ways to go to themountain is diffculty. Although tired we were we didn't give up.We overcame manydiffcults with passersbys' help.
Finally,we arrived the top of Taishan,and many beautiful scenes in oureyes that wo felt very happy.
Now,I've told my experience of this summer.How about you?I'm lookingforward your reply!
Daer David
Howare you? I'm writing the emile fell you about my summer vacation travel.
Iwith my friend went to Taishan in the summer vacation. Taishan is the highestmountains in the ShandongProvince. It also famousall around the CHINA.We are delighted in travel.The mountain path is difficult for us walking. Althoughwe are very hauseted. We don't up the time. Eventually, we arrived the mountainpeak. The environment is well. We looked a lot of varity plants . Such as,flowers, green trees.Although we don't know it names.

英语作文改错 急老师让帮同学改作文 不会 求高手 最好带理由 求救啊 有多少算多少 谢谢!Dear David Howare you doing?I have had a good time in this summer.I had visited the Taishanwith my classmates that is the highest
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I had visited the Taishanwith my classmates that is the highest mountain in Shandong Province.
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I'm lookingforward your reply!这里forward后面加to
回信中 I'm writing the emile fell you about my summer vacation travel.这里fell改成to tell
Iwith my friend went to Taishan in the summer vacation. 这里改成 I went to Taishan in the summer vacation with my friend.
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