麻烦帮我修改一下这篇英文短文下面是我写的一篇短文,麻烦高人帮忙改一下.有语法错误的改正,有遣词不地道的改正,有别扭的句子改正,有我用中文写的帮着翻成英文.非常感谢~~The friend nomina

麻烦帮我修改一下这篇英文短文下面是我写的一篇短文,麻烦高人帮忙改一下.有语法错误的改正,有遣词不地道的改正,有别扭的句子改正,有我用中文写的帮着翻成英文.非常感谢~~The friend nomina
麻烦帮我修改一下这篇英文短文
下面是我写的一篇短文,麻烦高人帮忙改一下.有语法错误的改正,有遣词不地道的改正,有别扭的句子改正,有我用中文写的帮着翻成英文.非常感谢~~
The friend nominated me to read the books called Twilight City. I followed her suggestion. I am very impressed with the second book of Twilight City, New moon.
Edward deeply fascinated Bella, also loved her unique scent. But Happy Hour is always short-lived. In her birthday party, the Bella accidentally cut her arm, the blood flows evoked Edwards family bloodthirsty nature. Edward eventually realized that he is a dangerous critter. He is a vampire. He may kill Bella at any moment. It makes him get into misery. Finally, Edward decided to protect Bella in the worst way. Edward and his family left the town of Fox. In terms of his decision, I thing he likes a fool.
Edward left, Bella's world completely collapsed, and she became an unsociable girl. She was only interesting in injuring herself. If she does some dangerous things, Edward's voice will appear in her mind. Bella indulge in her visional world. She jumped into the sea, let water envelop her body and enjoyed Edward’s voice. Edwards mistakenly think Bella had death, can not afford such a sudden a huge blow. He had said that Bella was his life, so he had no reason to stay in the world without Bella. At that moment, Bella found him. Edward began to realize Bella how important for him.
我们总是在失去之后才懂得珍惜,由在缅怀过去中丢失现在.幸而上帝对偶尔会网开一面,才让这个世界不会总显得那样苍白.
实在不行就帮忙把低下的汉语先译成英文

麻烦帮我修改一下这篇英文短文下面是我写的一篇短文,麻烦高人帮忙改一下.有语法错误的改正,有遣词不地道的改正,有别扭的句子改正,有我用中文写的帮着翻成英文.非常感谢~~The friend nomina
My friend recommended me to read a set of books called Twilight.I followed her suggestion.I am very impressed with the second book of Twilight ,New moon.
Edward fascinated Bella deeply,also loved her unique scent.But Happy time was always short-lived.At her birthday party,Bella hurt her arm accidentally ,the blood evoked Edward's family bloodthirsty nature.Eventually,Edward realized that he is a dangerous critter--a vampire.He might kill Bella at any moment.It made him get into misery.So,Edward decided to protect Bella .Edward and his family left the town of Fox.In terms of his decision,I think he was a fool.
Edward's leave made Bella's world completely collapsed,and she became an unsociable girl.She was only interested in injuring herself.When she did something dangerous ,Edward's voice would appear in her mind.Bella indulged in her visional world.She jumped into the sea,let water envelop her body and enjoyed Edward’s voice.Edwards mistakenly thought Bella had died and could not afford such a sudden huge blow.He used to say that Bella was his life,so he had no reason to stay in the world without Bella.At that moment,Bella found him.Edward began to realize how important Bella is to him.
翻译 （We always know how to cherish after losing .Fortunately,God blesses us at times let the world will not seem so pale.）
P.S.暮光之城这本书的书名应该是Twilight~

My friend recommended me to read a book series called Twilight City. I read the books and I am very impressed with Book two of Twilight City, New moon.
Edward deeply fascinated with Bella, also l...

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My friend recommended me to read a book series called Twilight City. I read the books and I am very impressed with Book two of Twilight City, New moon.
Edward deeply fascinated with Bella, also loved her unique scent. But Happy Hour was always short-lived. In her birthday party, Bella accidentally cut her arm, blood evoked Edward family's bloodthirsty nature. Edward eventually realized that he was a dangerous critter. He was a vampire. He might kill Bella at any moment. It made him get into misery. Finally, Edward decided to protect Bella in the worst way. Edward and his family left the town of Fox. In terms of his decision, I think he was a fool.
Edward left, Bella's world completely collapsed, and she became an unsociable girl. She was only interesting in injuring herself. Whenever she did something dangerous, Edward's voice would appear in her mind. Bella indulged in her visional world. She jumped into the sea, let water envelop her body and enjoyed Edward’s voice. Edward mistakenly thought Bella was dead and could not afford such a sudden a huge blow. He had once said that Bella was his life, so he had no reason to stay in the world without Bella. At that moment, Bella found him. Edward began to realize Bella was how important for him.

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My friend asked me to read a set of books called Twilight. I followed her suggestion. I was impressed by the second book of Twilight: New moon.
Edward was deeply fascinated by Bella. He also fell...

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My friend asked me to read a set of books called Twilight. I followed her suggestion. I was impressed by the second book of Twilight: New moon.
Edward was deeply fascinated by Bella. He also fell in love with her unique scent. But happy hours were always short. On her birthday party, Bella accidentally cut her arm, the blood evoked Edward’s family bloodthirsty nature. Edward eventually realized that he is a dangerous critter. He is a vampire. He may kill Bella at any moment. It made him get into misery. Finally, Edward decided to protect Bella in the worst way. Edward and his family left the town of Fox. In terms of his decision, I think he is acting like a fool.
After Edward’s leaving, Bella's world completely collapsed, and she became an unsociable girl. She was only interested in injuring herself. If she did some dangerous things, Edward's voice will appear in her mind. Bella indulged in her imaginary world. She jumped into the sea, allowed water envelop her body and enjoyed Edward’s voice. Edwards mistakenly thought Bella had died. He could not afford such a sudden and huge blow. He had said that Bella was his life, so he had no reason to stay in the world without Bella. At that moment, Bella found him. Edward began to realize Bella is how important for him.

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