各位谁的英语不错!看看我的英语作文写的时态错没?Today I was very busy,I got a lot things to do ,whToday I was very busy,I got a lot things to do ,when I was up ,I washed my teeth and had breakfast.There had four lessons .The first
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各位谁的英语不错!看看我的英语作文写的时态错没?Today I was very busy,I got a lot things to do ,whToday I was very busy,I got a lot things to do ,when I was up ,I washed my teeth and had breakfast.There had four lessons .The first
各位谁的英语不错!看看我的英语作文写的时态错没?Today I was very busy,I got a lot things to do ,wh
Today I was very busy,I got a lot things to do ,when I was up ,I washed my teeth and had breakfast.There had four lessons .The first lesson began at 7:50.The last lesson finished at 11:40.Then we had lunch at school.We only had forty minutes to rest and relax.At 14:00,afternoon classes began.There had four lessons,too.Afterschool，I have supper with my classmates .I went to bed at about 10:00 at night.
The day was tired ,but very interesting
各位谁的英语不错!看看我的英语作文写的时态错没?Today I was very busy,I got a lot things to do ,whToday I was very busy,I got a lot things to do ,when I was up ,I washed my teeth and had breakfast.There had four lessons .The first
Today i will be very busy,i get a lot of things to do.
或者
today i was very busy.i have got a lot of things to do.
时态没错。
可以，没错
只是时态的话没有错，但a lot 后面如果要接宾语的话还要加of，然后再加宾语即a lot of things,而不能 a lot things
时态正确。感觉该文是在记流水账。
这个主语有点不统一呀，刚开始用的i，到中间改成了we，后来有变成了i。读起来有点别扭。
时态嘛，倒数第三句，i had supper with my classmates。全都用的过去时态嘛。
时态可以丰富一点，比如用个完成时呀。内容也可以丰富点，有点太单薄了。