请帮我看看我的文章文法对不对,[只限今日]以下是一篇关於澳门的文章请帮我看看有没有问题How are you?Excuse m for my long silence.I was so happy when you called to tell me that you planning to come to Macau to visit

请帮我看看我的文章文法对不对,[只限今日]以下是一篇关於澳门的文章请帮我看看有没有问题How are you?Excuse m for my long silence.I was so happy when you called to tell me that you planning to come to Macau to visit
请帮我看看我的文章文法对不对,[只限今日]
以下是一篇关於澳门的文章
请帮我看看有没有问题
How are you?Excuse m for my long silence.
I was so happy when you called to tell me that you planning to come to Macau to visit me.There are many things to do and see here,but I think the most beautiful and popular place is Macau Tower.It is 10th tallest tower in the world.We can see the view of Macau.We can have a skywalk at the top of the building.There is a café and we can have a delicious lunch.Then,we can also go to A Ma Temple.It is Macau’s the most famous temple.There is a lot of tourists visit A Ma Temple every day.Macau is a member of the World Heritage,so there are a lot of beautiful buildings in Macau.For example,Ruins of St Paul’s,Guia Fortress.We can take many beautiful photos.Macau also is a shopper’s paradise.We can go shopping in New Yaohan for you to buy everything.Macau has a lot of modern casinos and hotels.We can stay in a comfortable hotel.We can eat much delicious and special food in Macau.It is very beautiful at night in Macau.I love my home tower.
I think you will love it too.I look forward to hearing for you.Please take care.

请帮我看看我的文章文法对不对,[只限今日]以下是一篇关於澳门的文章请帮我看看有没有问题How are you?Excuse m for my long silence.I was so happy when you called to tell me that you planning to come to Macau to visit
How are you?Excuse *me* for my long silence.
I was so happy when you called to tell me that you *are* planning to come *visit me in Macau*.There are many things to do and see here,but I think the most beautiful and popular place is *The* Macau Tower.It is *the tenth* tallest tower in the world.We can see the view of Macau *and* have a skywalk at the top of the *buildings*.There is a café *where* we can have a delicious lunch.Then,we can * go to A Ma Temple.It is Macau’s * most famous temple.*A* lot of tourists visit A Ma Temple every day.Macau is a member of the World Heritage,so there are a lot of beautiful buildings in Macau.For example,Ruins of St Paul’s *and* Guia Fortress.We can take many beautiful photos.Macau *is* also a *shopping* paradise.We can go shopping in New Yaohan for you to buy everything.Macau has a lot of modern casinos and hotels.We can stay in a comfortable hotel.We can eat *as* much delicious and special food in Macau *as we want*.*The nightview of Macau is* very beautiful.I love my home town and I think you will love it too.I look forward to hearing for you.Please take care.

i was so happy you called me to tell me your plan that you will come to macau to visit me.^……

Excuse m改成Excuse me
10th tallest tower 改成the 10th tallest tower
the most famous temple改成most famous temple
visit A Ma Temple every day改成visiting A Ma Temple every day
also is a shoppe...

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Excuse m改成Excuse me
10th tallest tower 改成the 10th tallest tower
the most famous temple改成most famous temple
visit A Ma Temple every day改成visiting A Ma Temple every day
also is a shopper’s paradise改成is also a shoppers' paradise
It is very beautiful at night in Macau改成the night is very beautiful in Macau
my home tower改成my home town
hearing for you改成hearing from you
其他基本上没有什么问题，不过那些地名要确认一下是否正确

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I was so happy when you called and told me that you planned to come to Macau to visit me....It is the 10th tallest tower in the world.... It is Macau's most famous temple. There are a lot of tourists ...

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I was so happy when you called and told me that you planned to come to Macau to visit me....It is the 10th tallest tower in the world.... It is Macau's most famous temple. There are a lot of tourists visiting A Ma Temple every day....It is also a shopper's paradise. We can go shopping in New Yaohan to buy anything you want.
另外说一下，这文章用了太多的we开头的句子，Macau也用的太多，不符合英语的习惯，可以改为here, it

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有点中国式英语的味道，本人英语水平有限，只能适当修改。
How are you? Excuse for my long silence.
I was so happy that you are planning to pay me a visit in Macau . There are many nice places here, but I think the most be...

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有点中国式英语的味道，本人英语水平有限，只能适当修改。
How are you? Excuse for my long silence.
I was so happy that you are planning to pay me a visit in Macau . There are many nice places here, but I think the most beautiful and popular one is Macau Tower. It is one of the tallest tower around the world, standing at the top, We can see the whole view of Macau. We can also have a skywalk at the top of the building. There is a café shop and we can have a delicious lunch. Then, we can also go to A Ma Temple. It is the most famous temple in Macau. Lots of tourists visit A Ma Temple everyday. Macau is a member of the World Heritage, so there are a lot of beautiful buildings in Macau. For example, Ruins of St Paul’s, Guia Fortress. We can take many beautiful photos. Macau also is a paradise for shopping. We can go shopping in New Yaohan and you can buy everything. Macau has a lot of modern casinos and hotels. We can stay in a comfortable hotel. We can eat much delicious and special food in Macau.The night of Macau is very beautiful. I love my home tower.
I'm sure you will love it,looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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改好的写在下面，你自己对照一下：
How are you? Excuse me for my long silence.
I was so happy when you called to tell me that you were planning to come to Macau to visit me. There are many things to do and to ...

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改好的写在下面，你自己对照一下：
How are you? Excuse me for my long silence.
I was so happy when you called to tell me that you were planning to come to Macau to visit me. There are many things to do and to see here, but I think the most beautiful and popular place is the Macau Tower. It is the 10th tallest tower in the world. We can have a good sight of the whole city on the tower and we can have a skywalk there. There is a café and we can have a delicious lunch. Then, we can also go to the A Ma Temple. It is Macau’s the most famous temple. There is a lot of tourists visiting the A Ma Temple every day. Macau is a member of the World Heritage, so there are a lot of beautiful buildings in Macau. For example, Ruins of St Paul’s, Guia Fortress and etc. We can take many beautiful photos. Macau is also a shopper’s paradise. We can go shopping in New Yaohan to buy everything. Macau has a lot of modern casinos and hotels. We can stay in a comfortable hotel. We can eat much delicious and special food in Macau. It is very beautiful at night in Macau. I love my home tower.
I think you will love it too. I look forward to hearing for you. Please take care.

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