好心人帮我看看语法有错么.The National Day is coming .I am very happy.I want to do something interesting. For example,reading a magazine and going sightseeing in the zoo.Jinan is famous for Spring.I thought about going to see the spring,bu

好心人帮我看看语法有错么.The National Day is coming .I am very happy.I want to do something interesting. For example,reading a magazine and going sightseeing in the zoo.Jinan is famous for Spring.I thought about going to see the spring,bu
好心人帮我看看语法有错么.
The National Day is coming .I am very happy.I want to do something interesting. For example,reading a magazine and going sightseeing in the zoo.Jinan is famous for Spring.I thought about going to see the spring,but decided on spending the vacation by the sea.I heard that Qingdao is very beautiful.We are leaving for Qingdao on 2nd of October.We are staying there for about 2 days.I am planning to visit my aunt .She likes shopping.So I am going shopping with her.I hope I can forget all my problems.
I want a relaxing vacation.

好心人帮我看看语法有错么.The National Day is coming .I am very happy.I want to do something interesting. For example,reading a magazine and going sightseeing in the zoo.Jinan is famous for Spring.I thought about going to see the spring,bu
For example,reading a magazine and going sightseeing in the zoo.这句话里面,for example 是要加完整的句子,你后面用到的两个都是短语而已,应该改为read a magazing and go sightseeing in the zoo;
Jinan is famous for Spring.表达有误,应该是Jinan is famous for the beatiful scenery in Spring.

基本没有错误，不过,but decided on spending the vacation by the sea.此话不怎么理解，你是说最后决定去海边度假吗？ We are staying there for about 2 days.这句话没有错误，这是用现在进行时表示的将来时，.I am planning to visit my aunt .您这句话也 是这么表示的。是的那就没有什么错误。...

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基本没有错误，不过,but decided on spending the vacation by the sea.此话不怎么理解，你是说最后决定去海边度假吗？ We are staying there for about 2 days.这句话没有错误，这是用现在进行时表示的将来时，.I am planning to visit my aunt .您这句话也 是这么表示的。

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We are staying there for about 2 days.
这句话时态不对，应该用一般将来时谢谢你，还有么。I am planning to visit my aunt 我觉得是I plan to visit my aunt So I am going shopping with her. 改为So I am going to shop with her. ...

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We are staying there for about 2 days.
这句话时态不对，应该用一般将来时

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