我的英语作文写得如何（我六年级水平）My Summer HolidayI hadan amusing holiday.I have plenty of time to do manymeaningful things.But I spent most of my holidays studying English and math,for I want to improve my English andmath skill.

我的英语作文写得如何（我六年级水平）My Summer HolidayI hadan amusing holiday.I have plenty of time to do manymeaningful things.But I spent most of my holidays studying English and math,for I want to improve my English andmath skill.
我的英语作文写得如何（我六年级水平）
My Summer Holiday
I hadan amusing holiday.
I have plenty of time to do manymeaningful things.But I spent most of my holidays studying English and math,for I want to improve my English andmath skill.So I went to the Rainbow Training Centre.
Firstly,I went to the Englishclass.There are many English teachers in the center.It is so kind of them tohelp me.I like them very much.One of the teachers is Mr.Goo.Mr.Goo wears a pair of glasses,a T-shirt and a pair of shorts.He spoke very well in the class.I had a deepimpression with him.But it was a pity that another teacher took his place to teach us.
Luckily,I took my English homework to Mr.Goo and he perfectedmy English knowledge.Since then,I asked him some English questions everydayand we became good friends.I think he is the best teacher in the bottom of myheart.
In thelast 7 days of the vocation,He teaches me math at my home every day.Thanks tohis hard work and I feel better in my math now.
Nopains,no gains.After trying my best,I had learnt how to fresh my English andmath skill.

我的英语作文写得如何（我六年级水平）My Summer HolidayI hadan amusing holiday.I have plenty of time to do manymeaningful things.But I spent most of my holidays studying English and math,for I want to improve my English andmath skill.
恩恩很好的~句子都很通顺 写的也很长诶.只有一些小错误


你的时态不稳定...应该都是过去式 但是有的 你用了现在是.


比如 I have plenty of time...应该是   had


另外  应该是   deep impression of him   或者  he gave me a deep impression


倒数第二段 应该是 vacation  吧  是打错了咩 哈哈



然后同样的 应该是   He taught me maths


Thanks to his hard work,i feel better with maths now.


这样更好,两者是因果关系  不应该用 and 连接


恩其他的都没什么问题了~下次一定要注意时态哦.看出来你是个很努力的学生~ 加油!天天向上~


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小学六年级?。。。还可以。you said amusing? but I did not see any amusing event. You have the vocabulary but you only try to use for the sake of using. Don't do it this way. It is better to use simple sentences and clear description of what you want to tell/write.

小学六年级的学生，英语作文能写成这样，bravo!!! 如“不二and精市”大神所述，时态有些不太一致，还有一些小的拼写和语法错误，部分表达还不太清晰和地道，但瑕不掩瑜啊，六年级能用英语写出这样一篇东西，已经很不容易了。做了些小的修改，供参考。新学期伊始，继续努力！！！
My Summer Vacation
I had a busy vacation this summer. （...

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小学六年级的学生，英语作文能写成这样，bravo!!! 如“不二and精市”大神所述，时态有些不太一致，还有一些小的拼写和语法错误，部分表达还不太清晰和地道，但瑕不掩瑜啊，六年级能用英语写出这样一篇东西，已经很不容易了。做了些小的修改，供参考。新学期伊始，继续努力！！！
My Summer Vacation
I had a busy vacation this summer. （加上this summer，和题目呼应一下。）
Although I had plenty of time to do many meaningful things, I spent most of my vacation studying English and math, for I wanted to improve my English and math skills. So I went to the Rainbow Training Centre.
Firstly, I went to the English class. There were many English teachers in the center. It was so kind of them to help me with my English. I liked them very much. One of the teachers was Mr. Goo. Mr. Goo worn a pair of glasses, a T-shirt and a pair of shorts. He spoke very well English in the class. I had a deep impression on him. It was a pity that another teacher took his place as our English teacher.
Luckily, I took my English homework to Mr. Goo and he helped me improve my English knowledge. From that day forward, I asked him some English questions every day and we became good friends. To my mind, he is the best English teacher I've ever had.
In the last 7 days of my vocation, He taught me math at my home on a daily basis. Thanks to his help, I improved my math skills.
No pains, no gains. Since I had tried my best, I learnt how to refresh my knowledge of English and math. （fresh, 你是想表达“复习”吗？）

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