短文改错 共8处错误Dear Helen ,Thank you very much for invite us to your apartment last weedend.We enjoy the party greatly ,singing and talking .In this letter,I'm sending you photo of your wonderful stay there.I hope you will like them .They

短文改错 共8处错误Dear Helen ,Thank you very much for invite us to your apartment last weedend.We enjoy the party greatly ,singing and talking .In this letter,I'm sending you photo of your wonderful stay there.I hope you will like them .They
短文改错 共8处错误
Dear Helen ,
Thank you very much for invite us to your apartment last weedend.We enjoy the party greatly ,singing and talking .In this letter,I'm sending you photo of your wonderful stay there.I hope you will like them .They remind me with the happy hours when we spent together.At this moment I am busy with my lesson ,for the final
exams are coming.I must do good in the exams.Thanks again and I wish you all the best.

短文改错 共8处错误Dear Helen ,Thank you very much for invite us to your apartment last weedend.We enjoy the party greatly ,singing and talking .In this letter,I'm sending you photo of your wonderful stay there.I hope you will like them .They
1.invite改为inviting,介词后用动名词
2.weedned改为weekend,单词拼写错误
3.enjoy改为enjoyed,过去时
4.photo 改为photos,照片要用复数,因为下文说到 I hope you will like them.
5.your改为our,是我们在一起的照片
6.with the happy hours的with改为of,remind sb.of sth.要用of
7.the happy hours when 中的when改为that或者省略,因为定语从句中缺少spent的宾语,必须用关系代词that（作从句宾语时可省略）而非关系副词when
8.lesson改为lessons,功课不止一门功课
9.good改为well,修饰动词do要用副词well
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invite-inviting enjoy- enjoyed photo-photos will-would remind-reminded when-that for-because
good-well

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Dear Helen ,
Thank you very much for [invite--inviting ] us to your apartment last weedend.We [enjoy--enjoyed ] the party greatly ,singing and talking .In this letter,I'm sending you [photo--pho...

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Dear Helen ,
Thank you very much for [invite--inviting ] us to your apartment last weedend.We [enjoy--enjoyed ] the party greatly ,singing and talking .In this letter,I'm sending you [photo--photos] of [your--our] wonderful stay there. I hope you will like them . They remind me [with--of ] the happy hours [when--that/which] we spent together. At [this--the] moment I am busy with my lesson ,for the final
exams are coming. I must do [good--well] in the exams. Thanks again and I wish you all the best.

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1.invite改为inviting;
2. enjoy改为 enjoyed；