在英语写作中,怎么避免用 I 开头句子.比如I have the capacity of achieving unity and coherence in writing and of using linking devices proficiently and correctly..I will be initiative and independent to do all my work and get it

在英语写作中,怎么避免用 I 开头句子.比如I have the capacity of achieving unity and coherence in writing and of using linking devices proficiently and correctly..I will be initiative and independent to do all my work and get it
在英语写作中,怎么避免用 I 开头句子.
比如I have the capacity of achieving unity and coherence in writing and of using linking devices proficiently and correctly.
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I will be initiative and independent to do all my work and get it in on time for good.Particularly,I will practice writing more,for example,writing diary earnestly in English every day.My goal is to get an 80% or above.I will realize this goal a reality through my diligence,endurance and creativity and listening to the class at my best.“Carpe diem” will become the motto when I am in the Advanced English Writing.I am expecting to be a smarter and better person after your class.I will be bringing all of these qualities to your classroom,and I anticipate that you will be bringing wonderful challenges and tasks to the classroom as well.

在英语写作中,怎么避免用 I 开头句子.比如I have the capacity of achieving unity and coherence in writing and of using linking devices proficiently and correctly..I will be initiative and independent to do all my work and get it
可以这样写：Achieving unity and coherence in writing and using linking devices proficiently and correctly are within my capacity.
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用I不蛮好的么

这句话应该是出现在自荐信中，在自荐信中多用I 开头的句子是可以的
通常避免这种情况都采用被动语态的方式，但在这里不适用。所以这里可以采用前置状语或从句的方法，如 As a coherent and fluent writer, I use linking devices proficiently and correctly. 不过这样主语还是I，或者是Coherence and linki...

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这句话应该是出现在自荐信中，在自荐信中多用I 开头的句子是可以的
通常避免这种情况都采用被动语态的方式，但在这里不适用。所以这里可以采用前置状语或从句的方法，如 As a coherent and fluent writer, I use linking devices proficiently and correctly. 不过这样主语还是I，或者是Coherence and linking devices have never been missed out in my writings.但不推荐这样，听着很奇怪

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