帮我检查一下这篇文章有语病么My School Life 　　　Every morning,I get up early.On my way to school the rising sun greets me with a smile.At school I get on well with my teachers and classmates.I like reading aloud in the morning.I lis

帮我检查一下这篇文章有语病么My School Life 　　　Every morning,I get up early.On my way to school the rising sun greets me with a smile.At school I get on well with my teachers and classmates.I like reading aloud in the morning.I lis
帮我检查一下这篇文章有语病么
My School Life 　　　Every morning,I get up early.On my way to school the rising sun greets me with a smile.At school I get on well with my teachers and classmates.I like reading aloud in the morning.I listen to the teachers carefully in class,and I often ask questions.I enjoy answering the teachers' questions.I do my homework in the evening.　　I take an active part in all kinds of activities.I play football and basketball after school with my friends.I read books in the school library.I talk with my teachers and classmates after class.What a happy life we have at school!

帮我检查一下这篇文章有语病么My School Life 　　　Every morning,I get up early.On my way to school the rising sun greets me with a smile.At school I get on well with my teachers and classmates.I like reading aloud in the morning.I lis
没啥大的语病,可是就一个字烂.典型的流水账作文（而且时间谁许还有点紊乱）,不过表哭,可能是小朋友你年纪还小吧.下面是我帮你修改的作文,觉得好就选我为满意回答吧.
The life in this school is seen by me the most valuable and interesting experience.First of all,I like the warm hugging of the brilliant sunshine every morning when I am walking to school,it gives me energy and courage to overcome the challenges in the rest of the day.And during the self-study in the morning,I enjoy reading aloud,that helps me to immerse in the context of books which I find out to be an extremely effective way to remember stuff.Moreover,I think getting alone with my teachers and classmates is enjoyable since my teachers are all very patient and wiling to help me out with any questions I have,and my classmates are really friendly because they always share their stories with me.Lastly,the after-school activities I take part in are very memorable experience for me.You know I really don't want to be a nurd who only knows to study all the time,so I join the sport club and plays football and basketball there.Those activities not only improve my fitness,but also teach me something new,something that I can't learn from my daily classes,those includes the sense of leadership,fair paly ,etc.To sum up,the school life is really meaningful for me and I will never forget it.

小说结构是小说作品的形式要素，是指小说各部分之间的内部组织构造和外在表现形态。结构一部小说的过程，就是小说家根据自己对生活的认识，按照塑造形象和表现主题的要求，运用各种艺术表现手法，把一系列生活材料、人物、事件分轻重主次合理而匀称的加以组织和安排的过程，包括小说作品情节的处理、人物的配备、环境的安排以及整体的布置等。
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小说结构是小说作品的形式要素，是指小说各部分之间的内部组织构造和外在表现形态。结构一部小说的过程，就是小说家根据自己对生活的认识，按照塑造形象和表现主题的要求，运用各种艺术表现手法，把一系列生活材料、人物、事件分轻重主次合理而匀称的加以组织和安排的过程，包括小说作品情节的处理、人物的配备、环境的安排以及整体的布置等。
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　　小说的情节是由特定的情节单元或叙事单元构成的。不同的小说篇章,其情节单元的构成方式是不同的,从而形成了不同的情节结构类型,不同的情节结构类型有不同的叙述特点和审美功能。从对中外小说创作的研究中,我们发现小说情节结构的基本类型有6种,即线状结构、网状结构、画面结构、象征结构、写实结构、散文结构。下面,让我们对这6种情节结构的叙述特点和审美特点进行分析。

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