哪位能帮我改一下下面的文章呢?The materail resources that creat wealth,no matter how they are distributed initially,they will flow into the hands of the people with entrepreneurial spirit--- a basic tendency of free market.These people a

哪位能帮我改一下下面的文章呢?The materail resources that creat wealth,no matter how they are distributed initially,they will flow into the hands of the people with entrepreneurial spirit--- a basic tendency of free market.These people a
哪位能帮我改一下下面的文章呢?
The materail resources that creat wealth,no matter how they are distributed initially,they will flow into the hands of the people with entrepreneurial spirit--- a basic tendency of free market.These people are then in possession of the other’s wealth,which will be used to generate and accumulate wealth for their benefits.All above is the root cause for the high efficiency of free market and the wealth will transfer dynamicly and simulteneously from the low-efficiency sectors to high-rfficiency ones.
Wealth itself cannot guarantee you more wealth in the future,as they cannot accumulate by themselves.The descendants of the entrepreneurs,who obtain wealth with their entrepreneurail spirit,cannot always utilize the wealth at their disposal most efficiently.In the societies ranked by indentity,the resource-using efficiency of the whole society is undermined.However,under the system of free market,the wealth of high ranked families can be transferred to the people with entrepreneurial spirit effortlessly.If they are reluctant to do so,they will be exiled out of the market and force to hand in their control over the resources through bankruptcy.With the force of the market,the resources will flow to the most successful entrepreneurs irreversiably.Therefore,th e overall efficiency of the society where economy is based on,power,identity and state-owned companies is much lower than those where the market is in dominant a position in allocating the resources.
Therefore,if the market is in in full play in allocating the resources,it is uncessary to worry about how the entrepreneurs plan for their companies upon retirement.All in all,the wealth moves towards to the hands with entrepreneurial spirit,which is irreversiaqble in free market.From this point,the urgent task for the society is to formulate various sound systems,where the wealth can be transferred freely;Likewise,the entrepreneurs can contrive systems naturally if they reach their potential and their property right is in protection.

哪位能帮我改一下下面的文章呢?The materail resources that creat wealth,no matter how they are distributed initially,they will flow into the hands of the people with entrepreneurial spirit--- a basic tendency of free market.These people a
The material resources that creat wealth,no matter how they are distributed initially,they will flow into the hands of the people with entrepreneurial spirit--- a basic tendency of free market.These people are then in possession of the other’s wealth,generate and accumulate wealth for their benefits.All above is the root cause for the high efficiency of free market and the wealth will transfer dynamicly and simulteneously from the low-efficiency sectors to high-efficiency ones.
Wealth itself cannot guarantee you more wealth in the future,as they cannot accumulate by themselves.The descendants of the entrepreneurs,who obtain wealth with their entrepreneurail spirit,cannot always utilize the wealth at their disposal efficiently.In the societies ranked by indentity,the resource-using efficiency of the whole society is undermined.However,under the system of free market,the wealth of high ranked families can be transferred to the people with entrepreneurial spirit effortlessly.If they are reluctant to do so,they will be exiled out of the market and forced to hand in their control over the resources after bankruptcy.Meanwhile,the resources will flow to the most successful entrepreneurs irreversiably.Therefore,the overall efficiency of the society where economy is based on power,identity or state-owned companies is much lower than those where the market is in a dominant position in allocating the resources.
Therefore,if the market is in in full play in allocating the resources,it is unnecessary to worry about how the entrepreneurs plan for their companies upon retirement.All in all,the wealth moves towards to the hands with entrepreneurial spirit,which is irreversable in free market.From this point,the urgent task for the society is to formulate various sound systems,where the wealth can be transferred freely;Likewise,the entrepreneurs can contrive systems naturally if they reach their potential and their property right is in protection.
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