这篇作文有没有错误?老师出的一篇文 实在看不出哪有问题sorryDear Bobhow's it going there?It's sunny here .the days get warmer and warmer when spring comes.so I'm going to play football with my friend this afternoon.but now i hav

这篇作文有没有错误?老师出的一篇文 实在看不出哪有问题sorryDear Bobhow's it going there?It's sunny here .the days get warmer and warmer when spring comes.so I'm going to play football with my friend this afternoon.but now i hav
这篇作文有没有错误?老师出的一篇文 实在看不出哪有问题
sorry
Dear Bob
how's it going there?It's sunny here .the days get warmer and warmer when spring comes.so I'm going to play football with my friend this afternoon.but now i have to finish my homework.my father is watching TV my mother is busy preparing a good meal for the family
In the future I think I'll be a doctor Because help and heal sick people will make me happy And people will call me“angel in white” that sounds interesting
Yours
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这篇作文有没有错误?老师出的一篇文 实在看不出哪有问题sorryDear Bobhow's it going there?It's sunny here .the days get warmer and warmer when spring comes.so I'm going to play football with my friend this afternoon.but now i hav
您好!很高兴能回答您的问题!^~^
这篇作文一看上去就知道是一封信,因此我发现了以下几点错误：
①新的格式错误,开头的Dear Bob后面要加“,”,后面的 Yours 应写在右下角,并且后面要加“,”在下一行同样的位置写上自己的名字.如：
……（前面的一大堆）
Yours ,
Li Ming
②the days get warmer and warmer when spring comes.
这句话的天气越来越暖不是用the days ,而是用the whether,而whether是不可数名词,因此该为whether后,get后面要加s
③so I'm going to play football with my friend this afternoon.
my friend改为my friends,用复数
④my father is watching TV my mother is busy preparing a good meal for the family .
watching TV my mother应该为watching TV 【and 】my mother
⑤Because help and heal sick people will make me happy
应该为Because helping and healing sick people will make me happy
嗯嗯,我就看到那么多错误,以上就是我的参考答案,希望能对您有一定帮助,谢谢!