修改这英文作文,不难哦,大家帮我改改哈,不要太深奥哦,初一的就好哈,最好把改的地方用括号写下原因和意思哦,会有很多的悬赏哦.one day of my winter vacationThis is my winter vacation.I am very happy,becaus

修改这英文作文,不难哦,大家帮我改改哈,不要太深奥哦,初一的就好哈,最好把改的地方用括号写下原因和意思哦,会有很多的悬赏哦.one day of my winter vacationThis is my winter vacation.I am very happy,becaus
修改这英文作文,不难哦,
大家帮我改改哈,不要太深奥哦,初一的就好哈,最好把改的地方用括号写下原因和意思哦,会有很多的悬赏哦.
one day of my winter vacation
This is my winter vacation.I am very happy,because I can't go to school and I can go to many places.Well,I go to Tibet,Tibet is very magic.I can see the Potala Palace,it is so majestic.On January 13,my family peole are very busy ,我们要准备很多健康的食物.有鱼,有鸡,还有更多美味的食物.So,iam very happy,but i have lots of homework.Oh,my God
有一些是中文,帮我翻译一下哦,唔唔
不要用翻译器哈,自己翻译啊,一定要准确哈.谢

修改这英文作文,不难哦,大家帮我改改哈,不要太深奥哦,初一的就好哈,最好把改的地方用括号写下原因和意思哦,会有很多的悬赏哦.one day of my winter vacationThis is my winter vacation.I am very happy,becaus
one（A 任何一天,用不定冠词就好了） day of （in） my winter vacation
This is my winter vacation.I am very happy,because I can't (don't have to 我不必,can't 是不能,你没有因为下雪或其他原因而不能去上学） go to school and I can go to many places.Well,I go to Tibet,Tibet is very magic.I can see the Potala Palace.(用句号）It （大写I） is so majestic.On January 13,my family （peole 删掉,family 本身就是家人的意思,而且是复数形式用法）are very busy ,我们要准备很多健康的食物 We need to get a lot of healthy food ready ( We need to prepare a lot of healthy food),有鱼,有鸡,还有更多美味的食物 including fish,chicken and many other delicious dishes.So,i am very happy,but i have lots of homework.Oh,my God,how can I finish all the homework?It is a headache!
给你最后加了一点,有个结尾.

We will prapare many kinds of healthy and delicious food,such as fish,chicken and so on.

1、I can't go to school and I can go to many places;
needn't ；
2、my family peole
去掉people；
3、We will prapare many kands of healthy food.There are fishes,chichens and other delicious food.
4、I am
5、I 大写

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就防护和福建和到家吧巴拿马徐的还记得合法把你你妈的聚精会神操你科技部德芙开始的北方的河腹背受敌内分泌表现出迷你型保持说空话记大过覆盖如果价格把你变出现那么不想吗内存的眷顾春波碧草的劲对吗机械能比较难史努比粗带回家和坚持不懈内存背这你 相比较着变化出的操你价目表女星们操你班主任基本上那些百辞莫辩脑出血吗现场保护局相关产业
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