英语翻译我写了一篇英语短文,但由于本人的英语水平有限,在此希望大虾帮着检查看有没错误哈,Now I’ll make a presentation about my hometown--------- Huaiyang Owing to this article is written all by myshelf,so withou

英语翻译我写了一篇英语短文,但由于本人的英语水平有限,在此希望大虾帮着检查看有没错误哈,Now I’ll make a presentation about my hometown--------- Huaiyang Owing to this article is written all by myshelf,so withou
英语翻译
我写了一篇英语短文,但由于本人的英语水平有限,在此希望大虾帮着检查看有没错误哈,
Now I’ll make a presentation about my hometown--------- Huaiyang Owing to this article is written all by myshelf,so without new word in it.
My darling hometown---------Huaiyang
Huaiyang is attached to Zhoukou City,Henan Province,It locates in Zhoukou northeast.Huaiyang is a beautiful country with a long history.There have been three capitals in this city,in addition that the last name creator Fuxi also lived here 6500 years ago.Therefore thousands of tourists from all over the world come to visit Fuxi.
Huaiyang is featured with Ninigou and Huanghuacai.The Ninigou is a small toy.Though it is made of mud,it will become very beautiful and lovely after spraing various of colours to it.So,it’s sure to become a toy that children like.
There is a very large lake in the center of the country .It is said that the lake covers 20,000 mu.What’s more,a lot of lotus flowers are planted in the lake .The lotus flowers are opend when it is in deep summer .That make the lake more beautiful,and the beautiful scene will attract a large number of tourists to visit.Anyone here who want to come to my hometown,then I’ll offer the best service except the fee of travelling .
There are also many stories about my hometown Huaiyang.For examble,a lot of handsomeboy and pretty girls are borned in Huaiyag,and I am one of them.Ok,as the time is limted,so I don’t state it any more.Thanks for listening to my presentation.Thank you very much!
附原中文：现在我给大家读的是关于我家乡的一篇“presentation”.
由于整篇文章均有自己写成,所以没有什么生词.
（主题）我的家乡——淮阳
淮阳位于河南省周口市的东北部.淮阳历史悠久.历史上曾经三次建都.6500年前,人文始祖伏羲在此定都,正是因为这样,每年都有成千上万的来自五湖四海的游客前来拜谒.
淮阳以泥泥狗和黄花菜为特色.泥泥狗是一个小玩意,尽管是用泥做的,但涂上各种各样的颜色后显得非常漂亮可爱.因此,就理所当然的成为了孩子们爱不释手的玩具了.
位于淮阳县城的中央有一个规模很大的淡水湖,据说有两万亩.在该湖中种植了大片的莲花,每逢深夏,湖中的莲花便争相怒放,由此组成的美景吸引了很多游客前来游玩.如果在坐的各位有谁想来我家乡的话,我可以提供最好的服务,但是不包括旅游费用哦.
关于淮阳的故事还有很多,比如说,淮阳还盛产帅哥、美女,而我就是其中一位.好了,由于时间问题,我就不多说了,感谢大家听我的“presentation”,

英语翻译我写了一篇英语短文,但由于本人的英语水平有限,在此希望大虾帮着检查看有没错误哈,Now I’ll make a presentation about my hometown--------- Huaiyang Owing to this article is written all by myshelf,so withou
It locates in Zhoukou northeast=>It locates to the northeast of Zhoukou
a beautiful country=> county?
There have been three capitals in this city=> Huaiyang was made capital thrice in the history
in addition that=> 没有that
it will become=> it becomes
The lotus flowers are opend when it is in deep summer => The loyus blossom in deep summer
as...so... 两词去掉一个
...其实错误还是有些多的...因为你几乎是完全按照中文翻译的,所以给人感觉十分奇怪

恩 差不多 很好

-It locates in Zhoukou northeast. 这句话改成 it is located in the northeast region of Zhoukou 比较好
-Huaiyang is a beautiful country。淮扬不是国家，所以不能用country，不然人家还以为你要搞分裂呢。把country 换成city或place。
-There h...

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-It locates in Zhoukou northeast. 这句话改成 it is located in the northeast region of Zhoukou 比较好
-Huaiyang is a beautiful country。淮扬不是国家，所以不能用country，不然人家还以为你要搞分裂呢。把country 换成city或place。
-There have been three capitals （加上being built) in this city
- in addition that the last name creator Fuxi also lived here 6500 years ago. 这句话完全不明白是什么意思，尤其是那个 in addition that the last name creator.改成 humanity's first ancestor FuXi has made HuanYang the capital 6500 years ago
-Therefore thousands of tourists from all over the world come to visit Fuxi. 伏羲都已经不在了，怎么visit? 直接说come here 就可以了。
-Though it is made of mud, it will become very beautiful and lovely after spraing various of colours to it. 把made of 改成made from, 把spraing various of colours to it 换成being painted with several colours
-There is a very large lake in the center of the country .如果想强调是淡水就在lake前加fresh water. country 改成city
-a lot of lotus flowers are planted in the lake .把planted 换成grown
-The lotus flowers are opend when it is in deep summer . 把lotus flowers 直接换成they， opend when it is in deep summer改成blossom in every deep summer
-That make the lake more beautiful, and the beautiful scene will attract a large number of tourists to visit.按中文直接翻译的话，就是 this beautiful scene has attrated many people.如果不想变句型，按你自己的来的话，就把that 换成this，去掉will， attratc 后面加s，去掉to visit,因为attract 已经有了来的意思，不用再说一遍。
-Anyone here who want to come to my hometown, then I’ll offer the best service except the fee of travelling . 在anyone 前面加for，want 后面加s，因为是第三人称，去掉then，把except the fees 换成but not paying for your tour package.还有，如果这个是正式的presentation，最好把I 和will 分开读。
-There are also many stories about my hometown Huaiyang.换成Huaiyang is a place teems with handsom guys and pretty girls
-as the time is limted, so I don’t state it any more.
改成due to time constrains, I will stop here

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My darling hometown<<一般上都不会这样写的 你可以试将它改成My lovely hometown