托福独立写作若出现两个需要比较的情况,怎么写?例如,tpo1中的独立写作：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges,sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libr
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托福独立写作若出现两个需要比较的情况,怎么写?例如,tpo1中的独立写作：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges,sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libr
托福独立写作若出现两个需要比较的情况,怎么写?
例如,tpo1中的独立写作：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges,sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
sports and social activities是写作重点,这个我知道.但是classes and libraries要不要在文章中提及呢?要的话,怎样与sports and social activities结合（格式?）才行呢?
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托福独立写作若出现两个需要比较的情况,怎么写?例如,tpo1中的独立写作：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges,sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libr
应该是要提及的
这个与其说是比较类,实际上是建议类的独立写作
一般采用利弊分析的写作方法 即列出pros&cons
利弊分析有两种方法
一种是一边倒,就是利远远大于弊(或是弊远远大于利), 你可以写出三种sports and social activities的优点
第二种是让步写法,更符合critical thinking,国外人是很重视这点的.在这种写法中你可以写出两个平等重视的优点,然后再写出一个缺点或是重视classes and libraries 的优点.如能在让步的基础上加以反驳,比如第三个point开头用Adimittedly这样的语气较轻的词,再对提出的缺点强行弱化、转换角度讨论或提出解决方案则更佳,即先承认不利之处,再予以反驳.
刚刚百度了一下,恰好第一篇文章就是这一类的http://wenku.baidu.com/view/001a390102020740be1e9b3d.html
这篇文章虽然连贯性不好(写作时要注重linker!这样才更有逻辑性),但使用了让步法,希望你能对其有初步理解
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