my last weekend个作文帮小妹检查一下,有没有错的语法I have a busy last weekend .Satyrday morning .I did my homework and read books .After lunch .I helped my mom cleaned the room .In the afternoon .I went shopping with my parents .Sunda
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my last weekend个作文帮小妹检查一下,有没有错的语法I have a busy last weekend .Satyrday morning .I did my homework and read books .After lunch .I helped my mom cleaned the room .In the afternoon .I went shopping with my parents .Sunda
my last weekend个作文帮小妹检查一下,有没有错的语法
I have a busy last weekend .Satyrday morning .I did my homework and read books .After lunch .I helped my mom cleaned the room .In the afternoon .I went shopping with my parents .Sunday moring.After breakfast .I visited grandparents with my dad .We were watched TV togrther .In the afternoon .I played the piano and played computer games .This is my last weekend .They are bust .But I liked my last weekend .Because I am happy.
my last weekend个作文帮小妹检查一下,有没有错的语法I have a busy last weekend .Satyrday morning .I did my homework and read books .After lunch .I helped my mom cleaned the room .In the afternoon .I went shopping with my parents .Sunda
.I helped my mom cleaned the room 中cleaned改为clean
We were watched TV togrther 中把were去掉
把They are bust去掉好了,有点多余了.
最后一段可以改为This is my last weekend and I was very happy during the weekend.
写的还是挺流畅的