修改一篇英语书信,错误可能有点多,最好加点谚语,成语之类的,使文章华丽点,TO:Bailey Happy birthday!congratulate your 20th birthday,you get more and more beautiful.Three years ago,I met you at class 10 grade1,and I fell in l

修改一篇英语书信,错误可能有点多,最好加点谚语,成语之类的,使文章华丽点,TO:Bailey Happy birthday!congratulate your 20th birthday,you get more and more beautiful.Three years ago,I met you at class 10 grade1,and I fell in l
修改一篇英语书信,错误可能有点多,最好加点谚语,成语之类的,使文章华丽点,
TO:Bailey
Happy birthday!congratulate your 20th birthday,you get more and more beautiful.
Three years ago,I met you at class 10 grade1,and I fell in love with you,but I dare not told you that I like you,because I was very worried about that you would refuse me,so,I thought a large number of ways to close you.Time goes by,I found that i love you more and more deep,but I never express my feeling to you,until we graduate from class 10,but I believe that you know I like you.Today,I want to tell you that you are my oasis in my soul.
I love you so much,I want to marry you in the future if I can give you a fabby life,so,I must fight for my dream.Although I will meet many problems on the way of my dream,but I will give over all problems!
You are my faith,I believe in you forever.
Please be brave!
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Today I want to tell you that you were,are and will always be the oasis in my soul.
这句话有问题没

修改一篇英语书信,错误可能有点多,最好加点谚语,成语之类的,使文章华丽点,TO:Bailey Happy birthday!congratulate your 20th birthday,you get more and more beautiful.Three years ago,I met you at class 10 grade1,and I fell in l
Happy birthday!Wow your are 20 years old now,congratulations!by the way,you are getting more and more beautiful!
I still remember three years ago we crossed our paths for the first time at class 10 grade 1 and immediately I fell in love with you.But at that time I was so afraid of being declined that I didn't have the guts to tell you how I felt about you.Today I want to tell you that you were,are and will always be the oasis in my soul.
I love you so much that I want to marry you and give you a steady life.So I must stand and fight for my dreams as a man worthy of your love.Even if there are countless obstacles out there,I will fight to the end.
帮楼主修改了一些语言生硬的地方,成语谚语没用什么,但是基本符合英语的说话方式了.
顺便说一句,我挺喜欢你oasis那句,很煽情哦!
放心,这句话是没有问题的,同时用三种时态是为了达到煽情的效果