谁能帮我批改一下英语作文,Dear Mary:I was very happy when I knowed you would come to my city.Therefore you need to know some things that are different between my city and America.Such as the climate,in winter,the weather is so cool and som

谁能帮我批改一下英语作文,Dear Mary:I was very happy when I knowed you would come to my city.Therefore you need to know some things that are different between my city and America.Such as the climate,in winter,the weather is so cool and som
谁能帮我批改一下英语作文,
Dear Mary:
I was very happy when I knowed you would come to my city.Therefore you need to know some things that are different between my city and America.Such as the climate,in winter,the weather is so cool and sometimes has sonw.Afterwards,in summer,the weather is hardly ever raining,but if raining ,the rain is so heavy.So you need take some raincoat and thickness clothes.About the diet,there is great different between the two areas.Then you need to get with it,and try to useing chopsticks.At last,could you take an America map to me.
Hope to see you as soon as possible!
Yours,
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谁能帮我批改一下英语作文,Dear Mary:I was very happy when I knowed you would come to my city.Therefore you need to know some things that are different between my city and America.Such as the climate,in winter,the weather is so cool and som
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i am a high school student and have studied in the young school for almost two years which set up only for three years.when i first entered the school,i had made five friends ,mo...

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one of my stories
i am a high school student and have studied in the young school for almost two years which set up only for three years.when i first entered the school,i had made five friends ,moreover,all of them lived in the same dormitory with me.it made me happy that i had never made so many friends,i sensed i was the happiest person in the world at that time.
three years ago,i failed the exam,entrance for senior-level middle school.only 539 grades in such important examination,thus i couldn't attend the key high school.however,my parents always comforted me for my failure,mom told;i think u are great!u are fond of painting ,dream of entering in a great arts college,they cost your much time so u have no enough time to review.i am happy with your achivement now.just take it easy.don't worry about it.;
afterwards,i came here,an art high school.now,my new life is advancing me...

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