看看语法用的对不对,句子用的通不通顺.有什么不对的都说出来.麻烦大家了.When you start to eat.Your digestive system start work.Your teeth and saliva chew foods.Make the foods become mushy through the esophagus to the stoma

看看语法用的对不对,句子用的通不通顺.有什么不对的都说出来.麻烦大家了.When you start to eat.Your digestive system start work.Your teeth and saliva chew foods.Make the foods become mushy through the esophagus to the stoma
看看语法用的对不对,句子用的通不通顺.
有什么不对的都说出来.麻烦大家了.
When you start to eat.Your digestive system start work.Your teeth and saliva chew foods.Make the foods become mushy through the esophagus to the stomach.
After the foods go into the stomach.The stomach start to work.The acid decompose foods.And then the foods become very small allow the cell to eat.
The foods go into the intestine.The intestinal wall will absorb nutrition of the foods into the blood.
When the intestine is straightened.It is Higher than three adults

看看语法用的对不对,句子用的通不通顺.有什么不对的都说出来.麻烦大家了.When you start to eat.Your digestive system start work.Your teeth and saliva chew foods.Make the foods become mushy through the esophagus to the stoma
第3行 The stomach starts to work.
其他的基本上没啥问题哈.

When you start to eat, your digestive system startS TO work.Your teeth and saliva chew food,MakING the food become mushy through the esophagus to the stomach.
After the food go into IT,the st...

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When you start to eat, your digestive system startS TO work.Your teeth and saliva chew food,MakING the food become mushy through the esophagus to the stomach.
After the food go into IT,the stomach starts to work.The acid decomposeS foods.And then the foods become very small TO allow the cell to eat.
The foods go into the intestine.The intestinal wall will absorb nutrition of the foods into the blood.
When the intestine is straightened。It is Higher than three adults
单词没改 大错误都改了

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When you start to eat. Your digestive system starts to work.Your teeth and saliva chew food.To make the food become mushy from the esophagus to the stomach.
After the food goes into the stomach...

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When you start to eat. Your digestive system starts to work.Your teeth and saliva chew food.To make the food become mushy from the esophagus to the stomach.
After the food goes into the stomach.The stomach starts to work and the acid decomposes the food.Then,the food becomes very small so which allow the cell to eat.
The food goes into the intestine.The nutrition of the food will be absorbed into the blood by the intestinal wall.
When the instine is straigtened,it is higher than three adults'height altogether.
有一些三单的形式需要加s,还有一些do应该为to do的形式

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Your digestive system starts to work when you are eating. Your teeth and saliva began to chew and digest foods that can make foods become mushy and then through the esophagus to enter into the stoma...

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Your digestive system starts to work when you are eating. Your teeth and saliva began to chew and digest foods that can make foods become mushy and then through the esophagus to enter into the stomach.
After the foods went into the stomach.The stomach starts to work.The acid decompose foods.And then the foods become very small that can allow the cell to eat.
The intestinal wall absorbed nutrition of the food into the blood during foods go into it.
When the intestine is straightened。It is Higher than three adults ~

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哇撒 错误多了。。。楼上几乎都是文盲。。。
when you start to eat, your digestive system will start working. your teeth and saliva will chew the food to make it mushy through the esophagus to your stomach.
after th...

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哇撒 错误多了。。。楼上几乎都是文盲。。。
when you start to eat, your digestive system will start working. your teeth and saliva will chew the food to make it mushy through the esophagus to your stomach.
after the food goes into the stomach, the stomach will start to work. the acid will decompose the food to make it small therefore your body can absorb.
then the food goes into the intestine. the intestinal wall can absorb the nutrition from the food into blood and becomes energy.
what's interesting is that when the intestine is straightened, it is taller that three adults.
这样一来就通顺了 可是写的很一般 有一点流水账的感觉。

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When you start to eat, your digestive system start to work.It begin by teeth start to chew food into pieces and they slide through the esophagus into the stomach.
After the foods go into the s...

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When you start to eat, your digestive system start to work.It begin by teeth start to chew food into pieces and they slide through the esophagus into the stomach.
After the foods go into the stomach,the stomach start to work.The acid contain in the stomach decomposes foods .And then the nutrients which are essential for our body have been break down into particle which allow body to absorb.
Undigested food goes into the intestine to be further defined.The intestinal wall will absorb nutrition of the foods into the blood.The left over undigested food goes into the big intestine as wastes.
When the intestine is straightened,It is taller than three adults .
帮你改通了,没有变大概意思~

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