i will seize the chance and work hard to achieve my dream that became a sales manager
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i will seize the chance and work hard to achieve my dream that became a sales manager
i will seize the chance and work hard to achieve my dream that became a sales manager
i will seize the chance and work hard to achieve my dream that became a sales manager
抓住机会用take比较好吧 然后我觉得后面应该用harder更好 然后后面的那个从句你是想用同位语从句吧,that后面应该是完整的句子,I want to become……应该可以
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I will seize the chance and work hard to achieve my dream to become a sales manager能解释一下吗?是这样的。 that 换成to,to do sth. 表示我是朝着变成一个销售经理的目标去奋斗,to 后面用动词原形,所以把b...
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I will seize the chance and work hard to achieve my dream to become a sales manager
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注意到了吗,这句话的开头是only,像这样only为首且它在句中作状语的一部分时,主谓要倒装,即情态动词will在主语I的前面了。例:Only by his help
个人认为chance不太理想,用opportunity比较理想。
个人认为dream(梦想)不太专业,用目标goal比较专业。
最后,dream或goal后面都不能用to,因为不是靠实现dream或goal来变成sales manager的。
建议修改如下:
I will seize the opportunity and work hard for my goal...
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个人认为chance不太理想,用opportunity比较理想。
个人认为dream(梦想)不太专业,用目标goal比较专业。
最后,dream或goal后面都不能用to,因为不是靠实现dream或goal来变成sales manager的。
建议修改如下:
I will seize the opportunity and work hard for my goal of becoming a sales manager.
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实现梦想嘛,用realize是不是好点儿
梦想是当销售经理,那是同位语,that引导不做成分,所以还要加一个主语