自己写了个小短文,错误多多,I'm a freshman.Topic of conversation that i will talk about university education today.When i aready graduated from highschool,i will have a lot of choices to the future.Look for a job to go and earn many money;s

自己写了个小短文,错误多多,I'm a freshman.Topic of conversation that i will talk about university education today.When i aready graduated from highschool,i will have a lot of choices to the future.Look for a job to go and earn many money;s
自己写了个小短文,错误多多,
I'm a freshman.Topic of conversation that i will talk about university education today.When i aready graduated from highschool,i will have a lot of choices to the future.Look for a job to go and earn many money;study in university going to get a higher degree,;even join the army.But Ihave studied in university,this is same as the most people.Why is this?
Because the college education is not only preparation for a careet,it is also preparation for life.The college education may help you even more understand world .let the life be richer,the field of vision is more open.
looks like those words,The more you learn,the more you earn.Not only obtains the money
我是一个大一生。今天我想谈谈大学教育的话题。当我高中毕业后，我对未来有很多选择：找一份工作去挣很多钱，上大学去得到更高的学历，甚至是去参军。但我和大多数人一样选择了上大学。这是为什么？
因为大学教育并不仅仅是为职业做准备，同时还是为生活做准备。大学教育可以让你更加了解这个世界和自己，让生活更加丰富，眼界更加开阔。
就像那句话，学得越多，得到的越多。不仅仅是得到金钱

自己写了个小短文,错误多多,I'm a freshman.Topic of conversation that i will talk about university education today.When i aready graduated from highschool,i will have a lot of choices to the future.Look for a job to go and earn many money;s
I'm currently a freshman.The topic that I want to talk about today is education at university .When graduated from middle highschool,I had adead of me many a choice for the future:either Looking for a job to make lots of money,going to college for a higher degree,or even joining the military service.Eventually ,I chose to be a student in this university,just like most of us .Why is that
One reason is that college education is not only the preparation for future careers,but also it prepare us for the rest of our lives.
Secondly ,college education may contribute to a good understanding of the world as well as ourselves,adding spice to life,enriching our horizon ,and broaden our visions .
As the saying goes ,"the more you learn,the more you earn" - and they are more than just money

I'm a freshman. Topic of conversation that i will talk about is today's university education.When I graduate from highschool,i will have a lot of choices for my future.Look for a job to go and earn mn...

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I'm a freshman. Topic of conversation that i will talk about is today's university education.When I graduate from highschool,i will have a lot of choices for my future.Look for a job to go and earn mnch money;study in university for a higher degree,;even join the army.But I have studied in university,this is as same as most of people.Why is this?
Because the college education is not only preparation for a career, but also a preparation for life. The college education may help you understand world even better. Let the life be richer and the field of vision more open.
As what have been said, "The more you learn,the more you earn. " Not only the matter of money.

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I'm a freshman. The topic that want to talk about is the education at university in today. When I graduated from highschool, I had a lot of choices for my future: Looking for a job and making some mo...

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I'm a freshman. The topic that want to talk about is the education at university in today. When I graduated from highschool, I had a lot of choices for my future: Looking for a job and making some money; going to college and getting a higher degree,; or even joining the army. Finally, I came here and be a student in this university, just like the most people doing. Why is this?
Because the high education is not only the preparation for a career, it is also for the rest of life. The college may help you to understand the world. Let the life be richer, the field of vision be more open.

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I'm a freshman. Today I'd like to talk about the education system of universities. When I graduated from high school, I had many choices of my future - to find a job to earn some money, to continue my...

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I'm a freshman. Today I'd like to talk about the education system of universities. When I graduated from high school, I had many choices of my future - to find a job to earn some money, to continue my education for higher qualifications, or even to join the army. Eventually I chose university, same as the majority. Why?
Because the education of universities does not only prepare you for the career, but also make you ready for your future life. It can make you understand yourself and the world better. It can enrich your life and widen your vision as well.
Just like the old saying, "the more you learn, the more you earn" - and the things you earn are more than just money.

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不如你发个中文的，帮你写吧。这恐怕得“洗心革面”了

第二句：today I'll talk about the university education .
第三句：graduated from high school,I had many choices of future.