英语作文作业.帮我看下有无错误.This Sunday .I go to the zoo with my classmates.On our way to the zoo,wemeet Kangkang."Would you like to go to the zoo with us?"I say."I afraid I can't.My mother isn't in now .I have to look after my sister

英语作文作业.帮我看下有无错误.This Sunday .I go to the zoo with my classmates.On our way to the zoo,wemeet Kangkang."Would you like to go to the zoo with us?"I say."I afraid I can't.My mother isn't in now .I have to look after my sister
英语作文作业.帮我看下有无错误.
This Sunday .I go to the zoo with my classmates.On our way to the zoo,we
meet Kangkang."Would you like to go to the zoo with us?"I say."I afraid I can't.My mother isn't in now .I have to look after my sister."Then he goes home.We get to the zoo.My classmates think monkeys are very clever.Elephants are kind.We all like pandas.I like pandas ,too.
看下有没有什么地方错的.

英语作文作业.帮我看下有无错误.This Sunday .I go to the zoo with my classmates.On our way to the zoo,wemeet Kangkang."Would you like to go to the zoo with us?"I say."I afraid I can't.My mother isn't in now .I have to look after my sister
This Sunday . I (went) to the zoo with my classmates. On our way to the zoo,we
(met) Kangkang."Would you like to go to the zoo with us?"I (said). "I afraid I can't. My mother isn't in now . I have to look after my sister."Then he (went) home. We (got) to the zoo.My classmates (thought) monkeys (were) very clever.Elephants (were) kind.We all (liked) pandas. I (liked) pandas ,too.
这个周天,是过去的时间,用过去式

I afraid I can't 改为I am afraid I can't

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This Sunday I go to the zoo with my classmates. On our way to the zoo,we
meet KangKang."Would you like to go to the zoo with us?"I say. "I'm afraid I can't. My mother isn't at home now . I have to...

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This Sunday I go to the zoo with my classmates. On our way to the zoo,we
meet KangKang."Would you like to go to the zoo with us?"I say. "I'm afraid I can't. My mother isn't at home now . I have to look after my sister."Then he goes home. We get to the zoo.My classmates think monkeys are very clever.Elephants are kind.We all like pandas. I like pandas ,too.
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This Sunday . I go to the zoo with my classmates. On our way to the zoo,we
meet Kangkang."Would you like to go to the zoo with us?"I say. "I afraid I can't. My mother isn't in now . I have to look...

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This Sunday . I go to the zoo with my classmates. On our way to the zoo,we
meet Kangkang."Would you like to go to the zoo with us?"I say. "I afraid I can't. My mother isn't in now . I have to look after my sister."Then he goes home. We get to the zoo.My classmates think monkeys are very clever.Elephants are kind.We all like pandas. I like pandas ,too.
把文中所有的动词改成过去式，因为是过去发生的事情。I‘'m afraid
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I like pandas ,too这句删掉，语义重复。

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