麻烦大家帮我改篇作文Part ADirections:You will have an English class next Friday,but you can't attend the class.Write an application for leave to your English teacher,Mr.Wang,telling him:1) why you ask for leave,2) what you will do to make u

麻烦大家帮我改篇作文Part ADirections:You will have an English class next Friday,but you can't attend the class.Write an application for leave to your English teacher,Mr.Wang,telling him:1) why you ask for leave,2) what you will do to make u
麻烦大家帮我改篇作文
Part A
Directions:You will have an English class next Friday,but you can't attend the class.Write an application for leave to your English teacher,Mr.Wang,telling him:
1) why you ask for leave,
2) what you will do to make up for it.
You should write about 100 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name.Use "Li Ming" instead.(10 points)
An application for absence
Dear Mr.Wang,
I am extremely embarrassed about that I can attend the English class next Friday.Because I have an interview for the volunteer of Olympic Game.As I really want to do something for 2008 Beijing Olympic Game.
I know that as a student,study is the main work of my daily life.So I will make sure to catch up my missed work from my classmates as soon as possible.Firstly,I will entrust my classmate with notes of the class .So that I wouldn’t miss the major points of the knowledge.And then I can learn the lesson by myself and finish the homework seriously.I t can check the result of my study.At last if I have any question I hope I can receive your help.
Thanks for understanding.
Yours student Li Ming
November 1st 2007

麻烦大家帮我改篇作文Part ADirections:You will have an English class next Friday,but you can't attend the class.Write an application for leave to your English teacher,Mr.Wang,telling him:1) why you ask for leave,2) what you will do to make u
embarrass是尴尬的意思,不怎么恰当．用sorry
that I can't attend你是无法去上课
As改成because,2008前加the
But I will make sure to catch up with my classmates as soon as possible.
receive改成get更得体
Thanks for understanding你是想说谢谢理解吗?太中式化了．Forgive me please.
Yours student是错误的说法．你可以说是Your student或就一个Yours
Li Ming写在Yours的下面

对缺席的申请
亲爱的先生Wang,
我极端困窘对此我能下星期五上英语课。由于我有一次采访为奥林匹克运动会的志愿者。如同我真正地想要做某事为2008 年北京奥林匹克运动会。
我知道, 作为学生, 研究是我的日常生活主要工作。如此我将保证尽快抓住我的被错过的工作从我的同学。首先, 我将委托我的同学以类So 的笔记那I wouldn’t 错过知识的主要观点。并且我能学到教训...

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对缺席的申请
亲爱的先生Wang,
我极端困窘对此我能下星期五上英语课。由于我有一次采访为奥林匹克运动会的志愿者。如同我真正地想要做某事为2008 年北京奥林匹克运动会。
我知道, 作为学生, 研究是我的日常生活主要工作。如此我将保证尽快抓住我的被错过的工作从我的同学。首先, 我将委托我的同学以类So 的笔记那I wouldn’t 错过知识的主要观点。并且我能学到教训由我自己和严重然后完成家庭作业。I t 可能检查我的研究的结果。最后如果我有任一问题I 希望我能接受您的帮助。
感谢了解。
你的学生李・Ming
2007 年11月1 日

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