帮我检查一下这篇文章的语法错误!My name is Omar.I come from China.Because I’m a inturned boy,so I don’t like talking with people who is strange for me.I like quiet space and like to stay at home to listen to music or read books.I wa

帮我检查一下这篇文章的语法错误!My name is Omar.I come from China.Because I’m a inturned boy,so I don’t like talking with people who is strange for me.I like quiet space and like to stay at home to listen to music or read books.I wa
帮我检查一下这篇文章的语法错误!
My name is Omar.I come from China.Because I’m a inturned boy,so I don’t like talking with people who is strange for me.I like quiet space and like to stay at home to listen to music or read books.
I was a high school student before I come here.Interestingly,I was studying in University only two months.Unluckily,two months are not enough to write an essay at the beginning of the semester.The important thing is I don’t like the course which I had chosen before I went to University.
Studying abroad is give me second chance to choose the course again.I also enjoy studying abroad even if it’s a very difficult time.This time will be an important time in my life.It teaches me many things.For example,how to cook food,deal with home stay,teachers and so on.
Now,I’m studying in this city.I chose this school for two respects.First,thsi school has ESL course which is the best language studying in this country.Secondly,this city is such a quiet city which is good for studying and living.So I chose here to study English.This time I’m going to choose jurisprudence if the objective condition allowed.
There is no doubt that all of the dreams require my English skills.For now,I have to pay more attention to my listening and writing.I hope that after this semester,I will not worry about both of them any more.I will also work very hard.

帮我检查一下这篇文章的语法错误!My name is Omar.I come from China.Because I’m a inturned boy,so I don’t like talking with people who is strange for me.I like quiet space and like to stay at home to listen to music or read books.I wa
My name is Omar.I come from China.I’m an inturned boy,so I don’t like talking with people who are strange to me.I like quiet space and like to stay at home to listen to music or read books.
I was a high school student before I come here.Interestingly,I studied in University for only two months.However,two months is not enough for me to write an essay at the beginning of the semester.The important thing is that I don’t like the course which I had chosen before I went to University.
Studying abroad gives me a second chance to choose a better course .I also enjoy studying abroad even if it will be a very difficult time.This period of time will be an important part in my life.It will teach me many things.For example,how to cook food,deal with home stay,teachers and so on.)
Now,I’m studying in this city.I chose this school for two respects.First,this school has an ESL course which is the best language studying course in this country.Secondly,this city is such a quiet city that it is good for studying and living.So I chose here to study English.
This time I’m going to choose jurisprudence if the objective condition allowed(?,客观条件允许?,if the conditions permit).
There is no doubt that all of the dreams requiring my English skills.From now on,I will have to pay more attention to my listening and writing.I hope that after this semester,I will not have to worry about both of them any more.I will also work very hard.
勉强改了一下,你看看吧!
确实要努力了,怎么说也还是英语专业的

第二行 ： 去掉 so 或 第一行 去掉 beacause
第二行 : for 改为 to
错误太多 看不下去了