求英语高手麻烦检查下这篇作文中的错误,是有关信用卡的优缺点的文章In todays fast the life conditions.Credit card has been most men the necessaries of life.Have to say,a credit card has brought people too much convenience.I

求英语高手麻烦检查下这篇作文中的错误,是有关信用卡的优缺点的文章In todays fast the life conditions.Credit card has been most men the necessaries of life.Have to say,a credit card has brought people too much convenience.I
求英语高手麻烦检查下这篇作文中的错误,
是有关信用卡的优缺点的文章
In todays fast the life conditions.Credit card has been most men the necessaries of life.Have to say,a credit card has brought people too much convenience.It solve the daily consumption of the many troubles.Example when buying articles can't carry much money,or is on a piece of goods is found that the amount you can use the overdraft and so on.Can be said that the credit card has made life easy a lot.
But credit card presence also bring some negative influences.Some people will not be able to correct estimate their spending power,and bought many didn't is very need things,besides credit card to pay the interest on shopping is such great debts furious,and found that these may be too late.
I think the credit card in dealing with emergency spending time is a very good tool,but does not mean it can optional spending money.Only credit card and achieve rational consumption handheld people who never to finally be credit CARDS are enslaved
二楼的你照搬别人的东西不觉得很过分吗？而且所答非所问，你抄过来的东西是我上次提问题的时候发给我的改正，麻烦你不想回答就不要答。

求英语高手麻烦检查下这篇作文中的错误,是有关信用卡的优缺点的文章In todays fast the life conditions.Credit card has been most men the necessaries of life.Have to say,a credit card has brought people too much convenience.I
With the rapid development of the whole world,living standard has been boosted.Therefore,credit card has become the necessicity in our daily life,which has brought a lot of convenience to humans.
Credit cards solve many problem generated when people are shopping everyday.People don't need to withdraw cash from ATM,and carry it everywhere.For example,when shopping online,people can pay by credit card instead of cash.
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However,it still exists some dark sides.Credit card make people overuse their money,which lead them to buy something they don't need.People tend to be lack of thinking about the worth of spending money,and pay for their item immediately,especially when shopping online.
To sum up,credit card is really a good invention for people too use,in particular when people encounter emergency.Also it gradually make people lose their ability to control their expense.Only rational comsuption can help people to overcome this situation.

Whether we should open school campus as tourist attractions?此句话明显成分残缺，根本没有表达完整的意思。帮你改成：Whether we should open school campus for tourist or not is under debate.
In campus tourism increasingly hot ...

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Whether we should open school campus as tourist attractions?此句话明显成分残缺，根本没有表达完整的意思。帮你改成：Whether we should open school campus for tourist or not is under debate.
In campus tourism increasingly hot today,school campus whether it should open became the focus of the topic. 这句话改成：With the capus tourism increasing intensely, school campus whether it should open their tourism or not become the focus topic.
So, whether we should be college campus open?这句话改成：Then, how should we open college campus tourism?
Some people think that opening campuses as tourist attractions is wrong.你的介词用错了，不是用as，是用for。
Opening the campus badly damaged campus environment and safety. 这句话改成：It is badly damaged the safety of campus environment for opening the campus.
However, some people think that opening campuses can let students and social more produce exchange. .
Let the students to their study direction has certain cognitive.这句话明显的成分残缺，不完整。
这两句话改成：However, some people think opening campuses can make students get more social chance to deal with others and recognise thier study direction tendency.
On the one hand may in students' vacation time opening campuses. In students' learning period close campus or opening part of campus.
改成：In my opinion, it can open in students' vacation time or students' learning period close campus and opening part of campus.
你的语法需要加强，句子中有很多都不成句，句子残缺以及意思混乱严重。
个人建议：
你需要从语法看起，读，记，背，体会语法以及语法应用情况，了解句子结构（包括词性，成分作用以及用法，句子构成，从句，语法现象以及用法等等）
词汇量方面，需要多记固定的句子表达以及单词。
语音，多跟着书本模仿，当然英语书本的难度一定要与你自己的实际水平相一致。
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