想让英语好的朋友帮帮修改修改我写的这篇作文,看看有哪些语法之类的错误,麻烦改正过来!It's best way to study English but not the only way.In my opinion,it's important that study language in a good environment.But doe

想让英语好的朋友帮帮修改修改我写的这篇作文,看看有哪些语法之类的错误,麻烦改正过来!It's best way to study English but not the only way.In my opinion,it's important that study language in a good environment.But doe
想让英语好的朋友帮帮修改修改我写的这篇作文,看看有哪些语法之类的错误,麻烦改正过来!
It's best way to study English but not the only way.In my opinion,it's important that study language in a good environment.But doesn't means we can't learn English well in a country speak Chinese.If only you hard,anything is possible.However,I have to say there are three bright sides of learn English in a English country.First of all,in a country everyone communication by English and I can improve my level in a short time.Secondly,I have more chance use English in the daily life.In the end,I will learn the native language.

想让英语好的朋友帮帮修改修改我写的这篇作文,看看有哪些语法之类的错误,麻烦改正过来!It's best way to study English but not the only way.In my opinion,it's important that study language in a good environment.But doe
Although It's best way to study English,but not the only way.In my opinion,A good environment is the key to learn English well,But doesn't mean we are in a state of Chinese learn bad English.As long as you work hard,anything is possible.But I have to say in an English speaking country learn English for three advantages.first,in an English speaking country Everyone to communicate in English that i can improve my English in a short time.then,i have many opportunities to use English in my daily life.Also,I can learn native English.
上面是我把你要表达的意思,重新给你修改了下,仔细阅读之后请采纳我,以后有什么英文问题可以帮你解决.

1.it's the best way.
2.it's important that studying language in a good environment...（你是不是想表达“在一个好的语言学习环境中怎样怎样，你这样缺少谓语和宾语，studying language....这个做的是主语）
3.but it doesn't means we can't learn En...

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1.it's the best way.
2.it's important that studying language in a good environment...（你是不是想表达“在一个好的语言学习环境中怎样怎样，你这样缺少谓语和宾语，studying language....这个做的是主语）
3.but it doesn't means we can't learn English well in a country people speak Chinese（我发现你缺了好多主语啊）
4.if only 的意思是但愿……就好了，你这样用意思就不对 应该改成 if you study hard,everything is possible.
5.there are three bright sides of learning Eg in an Eg country.
6.in a country where (引导地点状语从句） everyone communicate in Eg（用语言应该是in，不是by）,so i can improve my Eg level....
7.Second,i have more chance to use ....
8.Finally(最好是用这个，有个承前启后的作用）,i can also ...
啊啊我打了那么多一定要给我分啊。。。
楼主要继续加油哦。。。

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It's (the)best way to study English but not the only way.In my opinion,it's important that (to) study language in a good environment.B(, b逗号，小写)ut doesn't means(mean) we can't learn English well in a ...

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It's (the)best way to study English but not the only way.In my opinion,it's important that (to) study language in a good environment.B(, b逗号，小写)ut doesn't means(mean) we can't learn English well in a country speak Chinese（Chinese spoken country 或 country which speaks Chinese）.If only you (work或study)hard,anything is possible.However,I have to say there are three bright sides of learn English in a（an） English （spoken）country.First of all,in a(用that) country everyone communication(communicates) by（这里用in） English and I can improve my level in a short time.Secondly, I(will) have more chance (to不可省) use English in the daily life.In the end,I will learn the native language（看不懂，你想写什么，方言？）.

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It's the best way to study English but not the only way.(不知道是不是想表达学习英语有最好的方法，但是不是唯一的方法)In my opinion,it's important that studying language in a good environment.But that doesn't means we can't lear...

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It's the best way to study English but not the only way.(不知道是不是想表达学习英语有最好的方法，但是不是唯一的方法)In my opinion,it's important that studying language in a good environment.But that doesn't means we can't learn English well in a country where the people speak Chinese.If only you hard,anything is possible.However,I have to say there are three bright sides of learning English in an English country.First of all,there everyone can communicate with English and I can improve my English in a short time.Secondly, I have more chance to use English in daily life.In the end,I will be learning a native language.

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第一句是有问题的 你想说什么是学英语最好的方法呢？IT指代的是什么？我感觉应该是出国吧
going abroad is the best way to study english,but it is not the only way. in my opinion,studying language in a good environment is important,but that do...

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第一句是有问题的 你想说什么是学英语最好的方法呢？IT指代的是什么？我感觉应该是出国吧
going abroad is the best way to study english,but it is not the only way. in my opinion,studying language in a good environment is important,but that dosen't mean we can't learn english well in a chinese environment.
if这句我觉得不太好 换成where there is a will, there is a way吧.后面的句子没有转折关系 用however 不好，改成furthermore 吧 furthermore ,i have to say that there are three ways to study english in an english country. first of all,i can inprove my english level in a short time because i am in a country where everyone communicate with each other in english .second ,i have more chances to use english in daliy life,third ,i will learn the native language.
我不太理解你的three sides是什么意思 ，后面说的3个内容都是在国外学英语的好处 比较明显的错误是 communication这里明显是要用动词的 你却用了名词形式。只是稍微改了改 ，有的地方还是觉得蛮奇怪的。

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