改错总十个错误Yesterday my aunt went shopping and asked me to take care of my two little lovely cousins.I was busy with my homework,so i let them read picture books by themselves.Moments later,I found the pages of a book torn and lying all ove

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改错总十个错误Yesterdaymyauntwentshoppingandaskedmetotakecareofmytwolittlelovelycousins.Iwasbusywithmyhomew

改错总十个错误Yesterday my aunt went shopping and asked me to take care of my two little lovely cousins.I was busy with my homework,so i let them read picture books by themselves.Moments later,I found the pages of a book torn and lying all ove
改错总十个错误
Yesterday my aunt went shopping and asked me to take care of my two little lovely cousins.I was busy with my homework,so i let them read picture books by themselves.Moments later,I found the pages of a book torn and lying all over the floor.When I asked them who did that,the elder sister slowly nodded and bent down her head.Seeing that she was truly sorry,I just smiled,gave her some biscuits and told her not to do that again.When her younger brother saw the biscuits,he asked why he wasn't given any.She answered,"You didn't tear out the pages of the book,but I did."

改错总十个错误Yesterday my aunt went shopping and asked me to take care of my two little lovely cousins.I was busy with my homework,so i let them read picture books by themselves.Moments later,I found the pages of a book torn and lying all ove
Yesterday my aunt went shopping and asked me to take care of my two little lovely cousins.I was busy with my homework,so i let them read picture books by themselves.Moments later,I found the pages of a book torn and lying all over the floor.When I asked them who did that,the elder sister slowly nodded and bent down her head.Seeing that she was truly sorry,I just smiled,gave her some biscuits and told her not to do that again.When her younger brother saw the biscuits,he asked why he wasn't given any.She answered,"You didn't tear out the pages of the book,but I did."
感觉这是改过的啊!

貌似没有错哈