本人英语基础比较差,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?.现在,社会越来越重视感恩教育.心怀感恩的重要性.我的看法nowdays,peoole pay more and more attention to learning to be

本人英语基础比较差,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?.现在,社会越来越重视感恩教育.心怀感恩的重要性.我的看法nowdays,peoole pay more and more attention to learning to be
本人英语基础比较差,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?.
现在,社会越来越重视感恩教育.心怀感恩的重要性.我的看法
nowdays,peoole pay more and more attention to learning to be grateful wherever in school or society.as a student,we should learn to thank to our teachers because they teach us knowledge.as a children,we must thank to our parents because they bring us to the world.
it is improtant for us to have a grateful heart.someone who lose the grateful heart,they cannot reach others' help when they need.on the one hand,we should realize the important of learning to be grateful.on the other hand,we must know how to thank to the person who give us a hand,
in my view,firstly,parents should teach their children to learn to be grateful since child.secondly,school should set up the grateful course,helping students to know the
meaning of grateful easier.thirdly.we have to realize the important of learning tobe grateful by ourselves.

本人英语基础比较差,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?.现在,社会越来越重视感恩教育.心怀感恩的重要性.我的看法nowdays,peoole pay more and more attention to learning to be
(Nowdays改为Nowadays), people pay more and more attention to learning to be grateful (wherever in school or society改为both at school and in the society较为妥当).As a student,we should learn to thank (to 去掉,thank是及物动词) our teachers because（ they teach us knowledge汉式英语,改为they impart knowledge to us with absolutely no regrets）.As a (children改为单数的child), we must thank （to去掉） our parents because they （bring 改为过去式的brought）us to the world.
it is （improtant拼写错误,应为important） for us to have a grateful heart.someone who lose the grateful heart,（they 去掉,你此处已经用主语从句,不能再有主语了）cannot (reach 改为get）others' help when they need（加help）.on the one hand,we should realize the （important 改为名次importance）of learning to be grateful.on the other hand,we must know how to thank （to去掉） the person who （give改为gives） us a hand,
in my view,firstly,parents should teach their children to learn to be grateful since （child改为childhood）.secondly,school should set up the grateful course,helping students to know the
meaning of grateful easier. thirdly.we have to realize the （important 改为名次importance） of learning to be grateful by ourselves.
总体上还可以,十分应该没问题,继续努力,有问题找我,乐意帮忙!

第一行 learning 改为learn , wherever in school or society改为no matter they are in school or society 第二行student改为students 第三行a children改为children 第四行it改为It , someone改为Someone, lose改为loses第五行reach改为get, need改...

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第一行 learning 改为learn , wherever in school or society改为no matter they are in school or society 第二行student改为students 第三行a children改为children 第四行it改为It , someone改为Someone, lose改为loses第五行reach改为get, need改为in need, on 改为On，important改为importance 第六行 on 改为On , give改为gives , 第七行in改为In， since child改为when then are young 第八行secondly改为Secondly， 第九行 把of grateful去掉, we改为We, important改为importance, tobe 改为 to be 给10-12分都没问题

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Nowadays，people pay more attention to learn how to grate, wherever in school or in society. As a student, we should know how to appreciate our teachers, because they teach us knowledge. As a child, we...

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Nowadays，people pay more attention to learn how to grate, wherever in school or in society. As a student, we should know how to appreciate our teachers, because they teach us knowledge. As a child, we also thank to our parents, because they bring us to the world.
It is improtant for us to have a grateful heart. Someone who don't have the grateful heart, he couldn't get other people's help when they need. one one hand, We should aware how important to learn to be grateful. On the other hand,we should know how to thank the person who helps us,
In my opinion, firstly parents should let their children know that they would thank someone who help them, Secondly, school should open a course to let students understand the meaning of grateful heart. thirdly, we have to know the important of learning to be grateful by ourselves.
改了些，不知道对不对，希望可以帮助你。你写的还可以啦，如果是考试的话，有9-10分左右吧！

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