帮我检查下委托书的语法和词汇哈~i,***（the name of my company),hereby authorised Mr.***,holder of passport number ***,as the representative of ****（the name of my company) to discuss the matter concerned about Recycling Materials in

帮我检查下委托书的语法和词汇哈~i,***（the name of my company),hereby authorised Mr.***,holder of passport number ***,as the representative of ****（the name of my company) to discuss the matter concerned about Recycling Materials in
帮我检查下委托书的语法和词汇哈~
i,***（the name of my company),hereby authorised Mr.***,holder of passport number ***,as the representative of ****（the name of my company) to discuss the matter concerned about Recycling Materials in ***.

帮我检查下委托书的语法和词汇哈~i,***（the name of my company),hereby authorised Mr.***,holder of passport number ***,as the representative of ****（the name of my company) to discuss the matter concerned about Recycling Materials in
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***(name of company) hereby authorizes Mr.YYY,holder of passport number
ZZZZ,as its representative to discuss the matters concerning Recycling
Material in ***.
注：
I,***(the name of my company)
这结构是同位语
但’我‘显然就不可能是’公司‘
所以建议真接用
*** hereby
如果‘I’是代表公司作出授权的人
可以改为
I,on behalf of ***,hereby authorize Mr.YYY,holder of passport number
ZZZZ,as its representative to discuss the matters concerning Recycling
Material in ***.
而authorizes 改为 authorize
authorized 是过去时
在这里宜用’现在时‘
如果采用
*** hereby authorizes的结构
as the representative of ***
便可以省略至 its representative
一点意见
Mr YYY 若然公司员工
这委任信大致上可以接受
如果是外界人士
内容可以有补充之处
例如说明有效日期
以及在什麼地方可以作为代表

1） i,***（the name of my company),hereby authorised Mr.***,
主语要大写，用 I ；其后的,***（the name of my company), 似应删除，因为已经有主语 I ；authorised是过去时，要改成一般现在时。
2）the matter concerned about concerned 应该删除，因为其已...

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1） i,***（the name of my company),hereby authorised Mr.***,
主语要大写，用 I ；其后的,***（the name of my company), 似应删除，因为已经有主语 I ；authorised是过去时，要改成一般现在时。
2）the matter concerned about concerned 应该删除，因为其已经有 about。
3）Recycling Materials
这两个词的首字母为什么要大些？是专有名词吗？如果不是，都该小写。
I (或者 the name of my company) hereby authorise （如果主语用公司名称，那么谓语用authorises） Mr.***, holder of passport number ***, as the representative of ****（the name of my company) to discuss the matter about recycling materials in ***.

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