请帮我看看看,下面的汉语我用英语表达的对吗谢谢!Hello,my name is Tom,I have a happy weekend.Let me tell you.I often get up at seven,have breakfast at half past seven.I usually do my homework in the morning.After lunch ,I go to sta

请帮我看看看,下面的汉语我用英语表达的对吗谢谢!Hello,my name is Tom,I have a happy weekend.Let me tell you.I often get up at seven,have breakfast at half past seven.I usually do my homework in the morning.After lunch ,I go to sta
请帮我看看看,下面的汉语我用英语表达的对吗谢谢!
Hello,my name is Tom,I have a happy weekend.Let me tell you.
I often get up at seven,have breakfast at half past seven.I usually do my homework in the morning.After lunch ,I go to stamp show.I like collecting stamps very much.In the evening,I watch TV with my parents.At nine,I go to bed.This is my weekends.How about you?
我有一个快乐的周末.我通常七点起床,七点半吃早饭.我通常在上午做作业.在下午,我去邮票展.我非常喜欢收集邮票.在晚上,我和父母一起看电视.在九点的时候,我上床睡觉.这是我的周末.你呢?

请帮我看看看,下面的汉语我用英语表达的对吗谢谢!Hello,my name is Tom,I have a happy weekend.Let me tell you.I often get up at seven,have breakfast at half past seven.I usually do my homework in the morning.After lunch ,I go to sta
写得非常好,语言又流畅,又生动.只是其中有两点想和你商榷,你看看是不是应该加上（见括号）.
1. I often get up at seven (and) have breakfast at half past seven.
2. After lunch, I go to (the) stamp show.

我有一个快乐的周末。我通常七点起床，七点半吃早饭。我通常在上午做作业。在下午，我去邮票展。我非常喜欢收集邮票。在晚上，我和父母一起看电视。在九点的时候，我上床睡觉。这是我的周末。你呢？

写的不错就是Hello, my name is Tom, I have a happy weekend.中的，改为（）

Hello, my name is Tom, I have a happy weekend. Let me tell you【加about it】.
I often get up at seven, have breakfast at half past seven. I usually do my homework in the morning. After lunch , I go t...

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Hello, my name is Tom, I have a happy weekend. Let me tell you【加about it】.
I often get up at seven, have breakfast at half past seven. I usually do my homework in the morning. After lunch , I go to stamp show. I like collecting stamps very much. In the evening, I watch TV with my parents. At nine, I go to bed. This is my 【weekend】. How about 【yours】?
1. tell sb. about sth.
2.This is my weekends. weekend用单数
3. 你的周末呢？应该用名词所有格yours
4.另外多用一点连接词，像and， then之类
希望能帮到你。

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你好，我叫Tom，我有一个愉快的周末就让我来告诉你吧
我通常在七点起床，在七点半吃早饭。我通常在早晨做作业，吃完午饭后，我去了邮票展我非常喜欢集邮。在晚上，我和我的父母一起看电视。九点的时候，我就睡觉了。这就是我的周末，你呢？
我觉得你的时态用错了，周末发生过了，应该用过去式...

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你好，我叫Tom，我有一个愉快的周末就让我来告诉你吧
我通常在七点起床，在七点半吃早饭。我通常在早晨做作业，吃完午饭后，我去了邮票展我非常喜欢集邮。在晚上，我和我的父母一起看电视。九点的时候，我就睡觉了。这就是我的周末，你呢？
我觉得你的时态用错了，周末发生过了，应该用过去式

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你想要介绍的应该是你的happy weekend这一天咋过的吧？为啥会出现often 呢？那不是表示经常吗？还有This is 后面要跟单数哦！总体意思比较清楚，从感觉有点像汉语式英语，短语罗列的太中国话了，加入连接词会更好一些吧！英语要说的洋气一些哦！希望能够采纳，也希望你的英语越来越棒感谢您的回答，同时也感谢那么多热心的回答，我是想介绍我的happy weekend这一天咋过的，想问以下几个问...

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你想要介绍的应该是你的happy weekend这一天咋过的吧？为啥会出现often 呢？那不是表示经常吗？还有This is 后面要跟单数哦！总体意思比较清楚，从感觉有点像汉语式英语，短语罗列的太中国话了，加入连接词会更好一些吧！英语要说的洋气一些哦！希望能够采纳，也希望你的英语越来越棒

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