这个是英语改错的第一句,March 11 is a day when I will never forget.有人知道嘛?
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这个是英语改错的第一句,March 11 is a day when I will never forget.有人知道嘛?
这个是英语改错的第一句,March 11 is a day when I will never forget.有人知道嘛?
这个是英语改错的第一句,March 11 is a day when I will never forget.有人知道嘛?
March 11 is a day that I will never forget .I was on my way home from school at about five o'clock that afternoon and hoped that I could get home in to watch may favorite TV program .When I got to the bas stop I noticed people waiting in line .This greatly suprised me because nomally people push their way into the bus .Before I had time to reach my bus came along.
Without a second though I jumped the queue .The moment I did that .I heard someone shouting :'' Please queue up !" I turned around and saw a smiling old gentlman signing to me to stand in line.Then he explained that day was "Queue Day" intend to promote people's civil consciousness .On hearing that I felt ashamed of my behavior .I know that I will never jump the queue again and I hope every day will be a "Queue Day" .This will make our city a much better place to live in .
March 11 is a day which I will never forget.
这是个强调句,“it is … that …”所以要把when 改成,“that”望采纳, 谢谢!
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March 11th is a day that i will never forget
把will 改为would
把when改为that,或者直接删掉when也可。that在此引导定语从句,修饰day,that在从句中作forget的宾语,可省略~