检查一句英语从句Extra-curricular knowledge句子在这里She told us that while we were accepted the foreign cultures, did not forget our own Chinese culture. China needed our generation to keep going our Chinese culture.

检查一句英语从句Extra-curricular knowledge句子在这里She told us that while we were accepted the foreign cultures, did not forget our own Chinese culture. China needed our generation to keep going our Chinese culture.
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She told us that while we were accepted the foreign cultures, did not forget our own Chinese culture. China needed our generation to keep going our Chinese culture.

检查一句英语从句Extra-curricular knowledge句子在这里She told us that while we were accepted the foreign cultures, did not forget our own Chinese culture. China needed our generation to keep going our Chinese culture.
accepted前面不要加were,这里不用表被动
did not forget our own Chinese culture.
本来应该是一个祈使句
Don't forget our own Chinese culture.
"不要忘记我们自己中国的文化"
改成间接引语要加上主语
we should not forget our own chinese culture
或者直接改成told us not to forget这种行式.
accepted是短暂性的while是强调在...期间,这个多和进行时态连用
这里改成when we accepted比较合适
keep going这里用的有点怪怪的
改成preserve应该会更合适
She told us not to forget our own Chinese culture when we accepted the foreign cultures.China needed our generation to preserve our Chinese culture.
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She told us that when we accepted the foreign cultures,we should not forget our own Chinese culture.China needed our generation to preserve our Chinese culture.
补充;没注意到后面一句也是"她"说的,修改意见看楼上的.你自己综合一下.

She told us that while we accepted the foreign cultures, we did not forget our own Chinese culture. China needed our generation to keep Chinese culture going on .
楼上的，你最后一句有点问题哦！
go在这里只可以用作不及物动词（vi.），后面是要接on的！~~~~~

She told us thatwhen we accept foreign cultures, do not forget our own Chinese culture. China needs our generation to keep our Chinese culture going.
时态最好用一般现在时 。

She told us that while we accepted the foreign cultures, we should not forget our own Chinese culture, and that China needed our generation to keep Chinese culture going on.
China needed our gene...

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She told us that while we accepted the foreign cultures, we should not forget our own Chinese culture, and that China needed our generation to keep Chinese culture going on.
China needed our generation to keep Chinese culture going .也是她告诉我们的内容,即TOLD的宾语从句,两个并列的宾语从句,分别要用THAT引导.

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She told us that while we accepted the foreign cultures, we did not forget our own Chinese culture. China needed our generation to keep Chinese culture going .