请大家帮我看看下列句子的措辞是否妥当Firstly,the author has observed that there was an increase of enrollment in online degree programs and a decrease of expenditures for school building maintainance in Humana University last year,he
来源：学生作业帮助网 编辑：六六作业网 时间：2024/12/19 05:40:35
请大家帮我看看下列句子的措辞是否妥当Firstly,the author has observed that there was an increase of enrollment in online degree programs and a decrease of expenditures for school building maintainance in Humana University last year,he
请大家帮我看看下列句子的措辞是否妥当
Firstly,the author has observed that there was an increase of enrollment in online degree programs and a decrease of expenditures for school building maintainance in Humana University last year,he then assume that there is a casual relationshipbetween them.
主要是an increase of enrollment,increase能够用an吗?另外其他得分是否有错的或者表达不清楚,如果有请帮忙改正一下,
请大家帮我看看下列句子的措辞是否妥当Firstly,the author has observed that there was an increase of enrollment in online degree programs and a decrease of expenditures for school building maintainance in Humana University last year,he
increase 能够用an.
其他的：
he之前用逗号隔开,需要有并列连词and,且assume应该是三单式,即：
...,and then he assumes that ...
increase 可以做名词使用哦 不仅是动词。
没有其他错误。