高手能帮我看看这段话的语法用的对不对,麻烦帮我改改Form this stuff in such a situation which implied that many poor students will no longer studying in school if there were no more educational financial supports form governmenta

高手能帮我看看这段话的语法用的对不对,麻烦帮我改改Form this stuff in such a situation which implied that many poor students will no longer studying in school if there were no more educational financial supports form governmenta
高手能帮我看看这段话的语法用的对不对,麻烦帮我改改
Form this stuff in such a situation which implied that many poor students will no longer studying in school if there were no more educational financial supports form governmental funds that would makes the increasing number of teachers layoff their jobs which made educational source shortage of teachers,horrible.As the developing of our social city,governmental funds were paid on so many programmes which could beautify the environment between us,but they ignored the project which would make our future and younger generation became bright and got more knowledge.So i think it is time for giving some comments to our educational apartment to solve this problem that should facing and doing some effective measures as soon as possible.
里面只有三句话都是长句,希望高手帮我看看语法对不对,感激万分~
This stuff in such a situation which implied that many poor students will no longer studying in school if there were no more educational financial supports form governmental funds,makes the increasing number of teachers layoff their jobs which made educational source shortage of teachers,horrible.
With the development of society,governmental funds were used for so many programmes which could beautify the environment,but they had ignored the project which would make our future and younger generation become bright and get more knowledge.
So I think it's time for giving some comments to educational department to solve this problem which we should facing and taking some effective measures as soon as possible.

高手能帮我看看这段话的语法用的对不对,麻烦帮我改改Form this stuff in such a situation which implied that many poor students will no longer studying in school if there were no more educational financial supports form governmenta
第一句只有状语,无主句
As the developing of our social city 错
其他不必看了
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第一行studying----study，第四行as----with，developing---development，第五行between---among，第六行became----become,got---get，最后一行facing---face，doing---do

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