刚写的作文,求帮改下错误.When I was in grade school, I had a very good friend called "Bao", he is my best friend. One day, he brought his mother's cell phone to school. I asked him to lend me the phone to play, but he did not

刚写的作文,求帮改下错误.When I was in grade school, I had a very good friend called "Bao", he is my best friend. One day, he brought his mother's cell phone to school. I asked him to lend me the phone to play, but he did not
刚写的作文,求帮改下错误.
When I was in grade school, I had a very good friend called "Bao", he is my best friend.
One day, he brought his mother's cell phone to school.
I asked him to lend me the phone to play, but he did not agree
with. He said that his mother would be angry, and I told him that I
won't break it, but he refused me again. I was very angry, thinking that
I must get the phone and play.I quietly took the phone when he was not
paying attention , he soon discovered that his cell phone was missing,
and asked if I took it, I told him because he did't let me play with, so
I took it myselg. He was very angry to hear that and try to take the
phone back, I took the opportunity to shoot a few pictures of him, he
was shy and very angry,so he requested me to delete those photos. I said
no, I want them sent to the Internet, and then I ran up. He was very
disappointed and angry, and tryed to caught up.
I ran very
fast, so he eventually didn't catch up with me, had to shout at me in
the distance, and threatened me if I don't give the phone back to him he
will going to tear up my books. I thought he don't have the guts, so I
refused him again. but this time - how can you believe - he actually
really tore up my textbooks. I was so angry,because all I wanted to do
is mess around with him. and looked the mobile phone on my, and smash
the phone very hard to the ground.When I realized the thing that I
smashed is not a few dollars book, but a expensive phone, I was very
dejected and regret about what I did.
Eventually, my mother paid compensations for the phone that I broke and I have also lost my best friend.

刚写的作文,求帮改下错误.When I was in grade school, I had a very good friend called "Bao", he is my best friend. One day, he brought his mother's cell phone to school. I asked him to lend me the phone to play, but he did not
When I was in school,I had a very good friend called "Bao",one of my best friend.
One day,he brought cell phone of his mother to school.
I asked him to lend me the phone to play,but he refused.He said that his mother would be angry.I told him that I won't break it,but he still refused.I was very angry,thinking that
I must get the phone and play.I took the phone when he was not
paying attention to it,he soon found that his cell phone was missing,
and asked if I took it,I told him because he did't let me play ,so
I took it .He was very angry to hear that and try to take the
phone back,I took the opportunity to shoot a few pictures of him,he
was very angry,so he ordered me to delete those photos.I said
no and I want sent them to the Internet,then I ran away.He was very
disappointed and angry,and tryed to caught up.
I ran very
fast,so he couldn't catch me,he shout to me in
the distance,and threatened me if I don't give the phone back to him he
will going to tear my books up.I thought he don't have the guts,so I
refused him again.but this time - how can you believe - he actually
really tore up my textbooks.I was so angry,because all I wanted to do
is mess around with him.and looked the mobile phone on my,and smash
the phone very hard to the ground.When I realized the thing that I
smashed is not a few dollars book,but an expensive phone,I was very
dejected and regret about what I did.
Eventually,my mother paid compensations for the phone that I broke and I have also lost my best friend.
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