英文简历（帮我看一下这几句英文有什么语法等错误）1 .To manipulate the word,and Powerpoint Excell,and other office software.2 .I have strong self learning ability and team cooperation ability3 .In the school each club job cultiv

英文简历（帮我看一下这几句英文有什么语法等错误）1 .To manipulate the word,and Powerpoint Excell,and other office software.2 .I have strong self learning ability and team cooperation ability3 .In the school each club job cultiv
英文简历（帮我看一下这几句英文有什么语法等错误）
1 .To manipulate the word,and Powerpoint Excell,and other office software.
2 .I have strong self learning ability and team cooperation ability
3 .In the school each club job cultivating ,I get a good interpersonal communication skills and organizational ability

英文简历（帮我看一下这几句英文有什么语法等错误）1 .To manipulate the word,and Powerpoint Excell,and other office software.2 .I have strong self learning ability and team cooperation ability3 .In the school each club job cultiv
1.建议改成：Good at manipulating WORD/EXEL/POWERPOINT and other Microsoft Office applications.
原因：to do（动词不定式）一般表示即将.的状态,我觉得这里你要表明的是“已经熟练掌握.”,用good at （精于）更好,还有微软Office软件的Word、Excel和PPT都是应用程序applications不是software
2.建议改成：I am able to adapt to new things soon and work as a good team player.
原因：什么什么的能力不一定都要用have ability来表述,自学能力强建议用“很快适应新的环境、东西”来表述,比纯粹讲自学能力强更好,团队合作能力力,work as a good team player是很多欧美公司地道的讲法
3.建议改成：I've learnt good communication skills and organizational capacity from the School Clubs' activities.
原因：communication skills就是人际沟通能力或技巧的意思,从.中学得、获得用learn from比较好,建议这样改,另外学校各倶乐部的活动用activities取代job更符合英语的表达方式.
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1. very familiar with using WORD,EXCEL,PPT and other office software
2. strong capabilty of self-learning and a good team player
3. from the experience of club management at school, i'm also a good organizer skilled at communication with people

写简历是最好不要在句子里出现第一人称的主语，这样会给人一种过于主观的感觉。
建议：
1.having the skills in Microsoft Office software such as Word, PowerPoint, Excel,etc.
2.having strong self-learning ability and team cooperation a...

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写简历是最好不要在句子里出现第一人称的主语，这样会给人一种过于主观的感觉。
建议：
1.having the skills in Microsoft Office software such as Word, PowerPoint, Excel,etc.
2.having strong self-learning ability and team cooperation ability.
3.having got good interpersonal communication skills and organizational ability through the school club job cultivation.

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第一句没有谓语。。单单用to不行
第二句 可以
第三句改为：in the job cultivation when i was member of school clubs

i can operate Powerpoint, Excell, Word, and other office softwares.

Besides, i am good at self learning and team cooperation. in addition, people believe i have amazing organizational ability and interpersonal communication skills.  

is this a portion of your college essay? GOOD LUCK!! ( if it is a college essay, i think it's kinda vague. be detailed. give specific examples in real life to explain why you are such a talented and skillful person. stop using general words like : good , nice, kind. these words are too well spoken, and they have lost their meanings already)  

  English can be stylish!

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1 .To manipulate the word，Powerpoint and Excel,and other office software.
2 .I have strong self learning ability and team cooperation ability
3 .In the school each club job cultivating ,I get good interpersonal communication skills and organizational ability。