Topic:Some people think that development in technology is causing environmental problems,while others say that technology can solve these problems.Discuss both views.In many parts of the world,it is quite common these days for people to use state-of-

Topic:Some people think that development in technology is causing environmental problems,while others say that technology can solve these problems.Discuss both views.In many parts of the world,it is quite common these days for people to use state-of-
Topic:Some people think that development in technology is causing environmental problems,while others say that technology can solve these problems.Discuss both views.
In many parts of the world,it is quite common these days for people to use state-of-the-art facilities in daily life,which is regarded as bread and butter as well.While,when these facilities bring about convenience to people,they also bring on environmental problems at the same time.
Protection of the environment is increasingly becoming the focus of government and citizen concern in many places of the world.In order to reduce the high technology impact on environmental pollution,some people advocate that it is better for people to start a new lifestyle,which is without any kind of electronic products,plastic products and so on.For instance,communication technology makes people meet with each other fewer.So,they think if life they do like green lifestyle,they will meet friends more often ,as well as become cheerful and sociability rather than only sit in front of the computer or just use mobile phone to chat ,then they have no longer to trouble about how to let these useless electronic products destory for not polluting the environment.
However,other people indicated that people can also use high technology to solve these problems.To put it simply,it is possible for people to create a kind of machine,which could decompose the plastic,so that environmental pollution will no more be a problem.and then people could use time and money more effectively and efficiently with high technology in this ever-increasingly crowded and complicated world,if only people reach a balance between technology and environment.
So overall,my view is that the problem of environmental protection has reached this state.The fewer technology we use,the better protection we do.
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Topic:Some people think that development in technology is causing environmental problems,while others say that technology can solve these problems.Discuss both views.In many parts of the world,it is quite common these days for people to use state-of-
首先我觉得你写的偏题了
题目是叫你讨论两个观点 一：科技造成环境问题 二：科技可以解决问题
应该是这么写1.科技造成哪些环境问题 2.科技如何解决问题 3.总结科技虽然给环境造成问题 但是不是造成环境问题的唯一原因,而且社会的发展必须靠科技的进步来维持,应该想办法依靠科技同时解决社会发展和环境问题
这作文要等分写的呢不能1个多写一个少写,还有你的结尾也要稍微长点,语法错一点没什么关系不要出现大错误就好比如说I IS这样的,关键是你得先审好题目