帮修改一下英语作文The world needs loveYou know,love is beatiful.The world doesn`t have love,the moon can`t opearate,the river can`t drivel.so world needs love.some old people in the old people`s home often feel loney and boring.On sundany,I

帮修改一下英语作文The world needs loveYou know,love is beatiful.The world doesn`t have love,the moon can`t opearate,the river can`t drivel.so world needs love.some old people in the old people`s home often feel loney and boring.On sundany,I
帮修改一下英语作文The world needs love
You know,love is beatiful.The world doesn`t have love,the moon can`t opearate,the river can`t drivel.so world needs love.
some old people in the old people`s home often feel loney and boring.On sundany,I often play jokes,tell story to them.Whenever this time,they often smile,and I also feel happy.Because we have love,so we feel happy,the world becames beautiful.
So long as everybody show a spot love,the world will be happier.so the world needs love.Come on!

帮修改一下英语作文The world needs loveYou know,love is beatiful.The world doesn`t have love,the moon can`t opearate,the river can`t drivel.so world needs love.some old people in the old people`s home often feel loney and boring.On sundany,I
You know,love is beautiful.Without it,the moon can not goes round; without it,the river will dry.love is indespensble in this world.
When i saw the olders live alone,I will give them more help.On sunday,I will company them,joking with them,telling the story with them and I feel happy when they smile loudly.We love,so we are here and the world became more beautiful because of love.
If we share love with people around us,the world will be more bettering everyday.My friends,come on!The world need love,so do we.
感觉我写的好哈哈.
对了你的英语作文写的太口语化了,写成书面语.
It is said that the world without love like the river without water.I think it is right.In our world,we need help each other.such as.
像这样写,分会高.
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the world doesn't have love最好改成if the world without love
some old people inthe old people's home 这句改成 the old who live in the people's home

You know, love is beautiful. If there were no love in the world, it just like moon not spinning, river not flowing. So the world need love.
Some old people often fell lonely and boring in rest-ho...

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You know, love is beautiful. If there were no love in the world, it just like moon not spinning, river not flowing. So the world need love.
Some old people often fell lonely and boring in rest-home. On Sunday, I often play jokes and tell stories to them.At this time, they often smile, making me feel happy. Because we have love, we feel happy.The world becomes beatiful.
So long as everyone contributes a little love，the world will become happier.So the world need love. Come on!

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As you know, love is the most beautiful word in the dictionary. Without love, the moon couldn't turn around, the river couldn't flow down to the sea.
Some of the elderly are always lingering on t...

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As you know, love is the most beautiful word in the dictionary. Without love, the moon couldn't turn around, the river couldn't flow down to the sea.
Some of the elderly are always lingering on their rooms,being loney and bored. Every sunday, I always bring some jokes and stories to them, they react happily at that time, which makes me feel happy simultaneously. I know it's love that makes the wold beautiful.
As long as we all give out our love, the world will be more and more beautiful.

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You know,love is beautiful.Without love,the moon couldn't spin,the river couldn't flow.So the world needs love.
Some old people often feel lonely and boring when stay at home.On sunday,i will joki...

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You know,love is beautiful.Without love,the moon couldn't spin,the river couldn't flow.So the world needs love.
Some old people often feel lonely and boring when stay at home.On sunday,i will joking and telling them stories.At this moment,they often smile and i feel happy as well.Because we have love, so we feel happy,and the world becomes beautiful.
As long as everyone contribute thier love,the world will be happier.So the world needs love.Come on!

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