高手帮忙修改六级英语作文some people 's heart is pure which is always family with money,i admire them very much ,for instance today one people invent me to have a dinner,but i do not agree with it ,because of his atutide,at last he did no

高手帮忙修改六级英语作文some people 's heart is pure which is always family with money,i admire them very much ,for instance today one people invent me to have a dinner,but i do not agree with it ,because of his atutide,at last he did no
高手帮忙修改六级英语作文
some people 's heart is pure which is always family with
money,i admire them very much ,for instance today one
people invent me to have a dinner,but i do not agree with it
,because of his atutide,at last he did not let me have a
dinner,it was a joke ,it makes fun of life,everybody is a part of
the nature ,but i can not nuderstand if he is a real man that is
good for society.ok ,in a word ,because of his words the more
important is he does not love life ,and his feeling is out of day
,of course ,in the world ,the reality is better than lots of other
things.money is not good for anything.

高手帮忙修改六级英语作文some people 's heart is pure which is always family with money,i admire them very much ,for instance today one people invent me to have a dinner,but i do not agree with it ,because of his atutide,at last he did no
some people 's hearts are pure which are always familiar with money.i admire them very much .for instance today one person invites me to have a dinner,but i do not agree with it ,
because of his atitude,at last he did not let me have a dinner.it was a joke ,it makes fun of life,everybody is a part of nature ,but i can not understand if he is a real man that is good for society.ok ,in a word ,because of his words the more or not.ok ,in a word ,because of his words the more
important thing is that he does not love life ,and his feeling is out of day .of course ,in the world ,the reality is better than lots of other things.money is not good for everything.
没给你改任何思想及句型,仅仅是一些语法问题.
单词拼写有写问题,不过不知道是不是打快了.
一些单复数的语法问题.
不要一逗到底.
记得写作文的时候首字母要大写.