看看有什么病句I have a happy family.The family has four members.Have my father,my mother and I.We live in yangjiang.My father is an engineer.His 38 years old.He often do car to go to work.He is kind.My mother is a housewife.Her 35 years old.My

看看有什么病句I have a happy family.The family has four members.Have my father,my mother and I.We live in yangjiang.My father is an engineer.His 38 years old.He often do car to go to work.He is kind.My mother is a housewife.Her 35 years old.My
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I have a happy family.The family has four members.Have my father,my mother and I.We live in yangjiang.My father is an engineer.His 38 years old.He often do car to go to work.He is kind.My mother is a housewife.Her 35 years old.My mother is very beautiful.She likes to climb mountains.I am a middle school student,I was YangDong experimental schools.I'm 14 years old.I also like to climb mountains.On weekends,we often go mountain climbing.This is my family.I love my family.

看看有什么病句I have a happy family.The family has four members.Have my father,my mother and I.We live in yangjiang.My father is an engineer.His 38 years old.He often do car to go to work.He is kind.My mother is a housewife.Her 35 years old.My
首先四口人的四不能分开写,还有明明四个人,你只写了三个人.成员后的句号改为都好同时后面的“有”这个字要去掉,形成同位语.他是多少岁不是他的岁.你个别主谓一致也用的不对,时态也有用的不对的地方.错误太多,建议多检查

I have a happy family. The family has four members. Those are my father, my mother and me. We live in yangjiang. My father is an engineer. He is 38 years old. He often drive to work. He is kind. My m...

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I have a happy family. The family has four members. Those are my father, my mother and me. We live in yangjiang. My father is an engineer. He is 38 years old. He often drive to work. He is kind. My mother is a housewife. She is 35 years old. My mother is very beautiful. She likes to climb mountains. I am a middle school student of YangDong Iexperimental schools. I'm 14 years old. I like to climb mountains too. On weekends, we often go mountain climbing. This is my family. I love my family.

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The family has four members including my father,my mother and I.
He is 38 year's old.
He often drive his car to go to work.
She is 35 year's old.
She likes climbing mountians.
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The family has four members including my father,my mother and I.
He is 38 year's old.
He often drive his car to go to work.
She is 35 year's old.
She likes climbing mountians.
I am in YangDong experimental school.
I also like climbing mountains.
We often go climbing.
应该就这些，望采纳、、

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