我这篇英文的自我介绍（求职用）有没有什么语法错误?我英语不好,勉强写下这些,请指点一下是否存在什么语法错误或者有其他可以改善的地方,good afternoon,my name is ***,it is really a great honor to

我这篇英文的自我介绍（求职用）有没有什么语法错误?我英语不好,勉强写下这些,请指点一下是否存在什么语法错误或者有其他可以改善的地方,good afternoon,my name is ***,it is really a great honor to
我这篇英文的自我介绍（求职用）有没有什么语法错误?
我英语不好,勉强写下这些,请指点一下是否存在什么语法错误或者有其他可以改善的地方,
good afternoon,my name is ***,it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview,i would like to answer whatever you ask,and i hope i can make a good performance today.
now let me introduce myself .I am 23years old,born in xiamen,this month i graduated from xiamen University and have receive my bachelor degree .
In the past 4 years,I spend most of my time on study ,so i acquired basic knowledge of Marketing in theory.Besides,I have attended lots of Practice ,Through these I have a deeply understanding of my major.
“所以，我自信可以胜任销售工作”——我想再加上这一句，怎么翻译比较合适呢？

我这篇英文的自我介绍（求职用）有没有什么语法错误?我英语不好,勉强写下这些,请指点一下是否存在什么语法错误或者有其他可以改善的地方,good afternoon,my name is ***,it is really a great honor to
good afternoon,my name is ***,it is a great honor that I can have the opportunity for this interview,i would like to answer whatever you ask about this job,and i hope that my work experience can be suitable for the position that you are asking for.
I am 23 years old,born in xiamen and this month i graduated from xiamen University and have received my bachelor degree .
In the past four years,I spent most of my time to study ,so i acquired basic knowledge for Marketing in theory.Besides,I have attended lots of Practice ...(what are they ),Through these working experience I have a deeply understanding of my major.(what are your major)
我是加拿大的,不怎么擅长写中国简历.可是我个人认为,这一次interview应该是稍微正式一些,而不应该用类似performance之类的词
我认为你应该多加一些你干过的工作经验还有从中的体会,就会更完美了.
最后祝你好运
所以,我自信可以胜任销售工作:So,I believe that I can ace the sales!

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第二行的a去掉~
第四行received
So i believe me can suit this job

1 an interview
2 i am 23 years old, and was born in...
3 have received
4 i spent
5 basic knowledge of marketing theories
6 lots of practices
7 i have got a deep understanding of ...
恕我直言，语法错误太多，句式混乱，用词不地道．．

good afternoon, my name is ***, it is really a great honor to have this opportunity. i would like to answer whatever you ask, and i hope i can leave you a good impression today.
now let me introd...

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good afternoon, my name is ***, it is really a great honor to have this opportunity. i would like to answer whatever you ask, and i hope i can leave you a good impression today.
now let me introduce myself .I am 23years old, born in xiamen,this month i graduated from xiamen University and have received my bachelor degree .
In the past 4 years, I spend most of my time on study ,so i have acquired the basic knowledge of Marketing. Besides, I have attended lots of Practice ,Through these I have a deep understanding of my major.

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