自己写了篇英语作文,详细的帮我批下并告诉我语法怎么错了!on the deveplo rapidly today's,the internet has been become the need of tool for people.but,it gace advantages and disadvantages.on the hand,people think that the interne

自己写了篇英语作文,详细的帮我批下并告诉我语法怎么错了!on the deveplo rapidly today's,the internet has been become the need of tool for people.but,it gace advantages and disadvantages.on the hand,people think that the interne
自己写了篇英语作文,详细的帮我批下并告诉我语法怎么错了!
on the deveplo rapidly today's,the internet has been become the need of tool for people.but,it gace advantages and disadvantages.
on the hand,people think that the internet can increase of efficiency in study and work.because of it's very convenient.moreover,rich of resoures make people efficiency.on the other hand,because,the young man indulge in the internet's game.so people think that may influeace of learning.
in my opinion,with develop of society.the internet will be importance to daily life of people.young man should use of resonable the internet and on the way of used work and study more than play a internet's game.

自己写了篇英语作文,详细的帮我批下并告诉我语法怎么错了!on the deveplo rapidly today's,the internet has been become the need of tool for people.but,it gace advantages and disadvantages.on the hand,people think that the interne
第一句看上去就像机器翻译一样.是手写的么.

Due to the rapid development today,the internet became a needed tool for people. But it has both advantages and disadvantages.
on one hand,people think that the internet can increase efficie...

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Due to the rapid development today,the internet became a needed tool for people. But it has both advantages and disadvantages.
on one hand,people think that the internet can increase efficiency in study and work.because it's very convenient.moreover,rich resources make people efficiency.on the other hand,the young man indulged themselves in the internet's game.so people think that may have bad influence to learning.
in my opinion,with the develop of society.the internet will be important for daily life of people.young man should use the internet resonablely and in the way of use it for work and study more than play a internet game.

你这哪里是自己写的一看就知道网上翻译的太明显了。

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