我写了一篇英语短文,帮我看看哪里有错I think exams in school are trouble.In order to get good marks,studengs are too busy to do sports.And most of students always get into trouble,because they are often worried about the exams.I guess,

我写了一篇英语短文,帮我看看哪里有错I think exams in school are trouble.In order to get good marks,studengs are too busy to do sports.And most of students always get into trouble,because they are often worried about the exams.I guess,
我写了一篇英语短文,帮我看看哪里有错
I think exams in school are trouble.In order to get good marks,studengs are too busy to do sports.And most of students always get into trouble,because they are often worried about the exams.I guess,about 98% of the students don't want to have exams.So I suggest:don't have any exams,or have exams just once a year.

我写了一篇英语短文,帮我看看哪里有错I think exams in school are trouble.In order to get good marks,studengs are too busy to do sports.And most of students always get into trouble,because they are often worried about the exams.I guess,
I think【the】exams in school are 【terrible】.In order to get good marks,【students】are too busy to do sports.And most of students always get into trouble,because they are often worried about the exams.I guess,about 98% of the students don't want to have exams.So I suggest【not having】any exams,or【having】exams just once a year.

I think exams in school are trouble（语意不完整，maybe "exams are troubling"?. In order to get good marks,students are(perhaps "become" is better here?) too busy to do sports.And most ("of" not necessary) st...

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I think exams in school are trouble（语意不完整，maybe "exams are troubling"?. In order to get good marks,students are(perhaps "become" is better here?) too busy to do sports.And most ("of" not necessary) students always get into trouble(这半个分句是废话，没有实际意义，建议解释清楚是什么样的trouble),because they are often worried about the exams.I guess,about 98% of the students don't want to have exams.So I suggest:don't have（maybe u mean "cancel all exams"?） any exams,or have("reduce exams to once a year"?) exams just once a year.

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I guess,about 98% of the students。。。
改成；i guess there was about 98% of the students。。。
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