希望帮忙修一下我的英语作文,虽然很失败的作文但是我在努力1,今年来中国城市的摩托车发展情况. 2,摩托车的优点和缺点 3.你对我国城市中摩托车发展的前景的看法 motorc

希望帮忙修一下我的英语作文,虽然很失败的作文但是我在努力1,今年来中国城市的摩托车发展情况. 2,摩托车的优点和缺点 3.你对我国城市中摩托车发展的前景的看法 motorc
希望帮忙修一下我的英语作文,虽然很失败的作文但是我在努力
1,今年来中国城市的摩托车发展情况.
2,摩托车的优点和缺点
3.你对我国城市中摩托车发展的前景的看法
motorcycles and city trafic
Recently,more and more people like to drive motorcycles to woke or play ,and many motorcycles appear in the city quickly in the last years.It has become the most important part in people's life.
Many people think motorcycles useful because compared with walk it's more quicker than before ,and ii's very small and smart ,somepeople think it is very cool that drive on the motorcycles .Something, however, everything has two side and motorcycles has not an exception.Somepeople think drive motorcycles is air pollution and unsafety ,even people carry another person at the back ,it is very danger to all of them .It make more bed factor than useful.
In my opinion ,people could go to wore or study by bus or on walk ,it is more safety and clear .even if drive on motorcycles in city is cool and easy ,but more and more motorcycles appeared in the city make our environment be pollution and crowed ,So i suggest that we can choose other trafic and reduce the motorcyces appear in the city.

希望帮忙修一下我的英语作文,虽然很失败的作文但是我在努力1,今年来中国城市的摩托车发展情况. 2,摩托车的优点和缺点 3.你对我国城市中摩托车发展的前景的看法 motorc
motorcycles and city trafic
Recently,more and more people likeD to drive motorcycles to WORK or play ,and many motorcycles appearED in the city quickly in the PAST years.It has become the most important part in people's life.
Many people think motorcycles ARE useful because WHEN compared with walk it's more quicker. BESIDES, ii's very small and smart. Some people think it is very cool TO drive the motorcycles .However, everything has two sideS and motorcycles IS not an exception.Some people think drivING motorcycles CAUSESair pollution and unsafety. WHEN people carry another person at the back ,it is very danger to all of them .IT HAS MORE DISADVANTAGES THAN ADVANTAGES.
In my opinion ,people could go to worK or study by bus or on FOOT. IN ADDITION,it is SAFER and cleaNER .even if DRIVING A motorcycles in city is cool and easy ,but more and more motorcycles in the city WILL make our environment POLLUTED and crowDed ,So i suggest that we SHOULD choose other trafic WAYS and reduce the motorcyces in the city.

Motorcycles and City Traffic
Recently,more and more people prefer to driving motorcycles to work or play ,and many motorcycles have appeared widely in the city in the past years.It has become th...

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Motorcycles and City Traffic
Recently,more and more people prefer to driving motorcycles to work or play ,and many motorcycles have appeared widely in the city in the past years.It has become the most important part of people's life.
Many people think motorcycles useful .Compared with walking ,it's much quicker ,and it's very small ,some people think it is very cool to drive motorcycles . However, everything has two sides and motorcycle is not an exception.Some people think driving motorcycles may cause air pollution and danger ,and some people even carry another person at the back ,it is very dangerous for them .It may cause worse factor than its adventures.
In my opinion ,people can go for work or study by bus or walking ,it is more safely .even if driving motorcycles in city is cool and convinent ,more and more motorcycles have appeared in the city and that had made our environment polluted and crowed ,So i suggest that we can choose other transport so that we can make our enviroment more beautiful

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Motorcycles and City Traffic
Recently,more and more people like to drive motorcycles to work or play ,and many motorcycles have appeared quickly in the city in the last years.It has become the m...

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Motorcycles and City Traffic
Recently,more and more people like to drive motorcycles to work or play ,and many motorcycles have appeared quickly in the city in the last years.It has become the most important part in people's life.
Many people think motorcycles useful because compared with walk it's much quicker than before ,and ii's very small and smart ,somepeople think it is very cool to drive on the motorcycles . However, everything has two sides and motorcycles is not an exception.Somepeople think driving motorcycles may cause air pollution and unsafety ,and some people even carry another person at the back ,it is very dangerous to all of them .It may make worse factor than useful.
In my opinion ,people could go to work or study by bus or on walk ,it is more safety and clear .even if driving on motorcycles in city is cool and easy ,but more and more motorcycles having appeared in the city makes our environment be polluted and crowed ,So i suggest that we can choose other trafic tools and reduce the number of motorcyces in the city.
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motorcycles and city trafic
Recently,more and more people like to drive motorcycles to woke and play ,and many motorcycles appear in the city quickly in the last years.It has become a most import...

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motorcycles and city trafic
Recently,more and more people like to drive motorcycles to woke and play ,and many motorcycles appear in the city quickly in the last years.It has become a most important part in people's life.
Many people think motorcycles useful because compared with walk it's quicker than before ,and it's very small and smart ,somepeople think it is very cool that driving on the motorcycles .Something, however, everything has two sides and motorcycles has not an exception.Somepeople think driving motorcycles is air polluted and unsafe ,even people carry another person at the back ,it is very danger to all of them .It make more bed factor than usefulness.
In my opinion ,people could go to wore and study by bus or on walk ,it is more safe and environmental .even if drive on motorcycles in city is cool and easy ,but more and more motorcycles appeared in the city make our environment be pollution and crowed ,So i suggest that we can choose other transportations

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