求位大神改正以下句子并说明错在哪里了,如果可以的话,The little old lady has a great dog,its name is Lou-Lou .The Little old lady fall down with the accident.Then,Lou-Lou been took to a train.Soon,it met its new master ,that's a
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求位大神改正以下句子并说明错在哪里了,如果可以的话,The little old lady has a great dog,its name is Lou-Lou .The Little old lady fall down with the accident.Then,Lou-Lou been took to a train.Soon,it met its new master ,that's a
求位大神改正以下句子并说明错在哪里了,如果可以的话,
The little old lady has a great dog,its name is Lou-Lou .The Little old lady fall down with the accident.Then,Lou-Lou been took to a train.Soon,it met its new master ,that's a young lady.Final,it met its old master.
求位大神改正以下句子并说明错在哪里了,如果可以的话,The little old lady has a great dog,its name is Lou-Lou .The Little old lady fall down with the accident.Then,Lou-Lou been took to a train.Soon,it met its new master ,that's a
看了两遍完全不知道这句话是不是要表明= =这只狗的前主人在一场事故中摔倒了,然后它坐了个火车,很快见到了新的主人.不过你这最后一句完全不明白啥意思,可以先说明一下意思再修改吗?
还有目前的话,有几个问题第一句里面没必要用the来修饰老太太,用a即可,因为是全文开头,只是陈述,除非这段话前面已经开始些老太的事情了.
还有old lady已经可以了,不太明白加little的含义,一般都是意指小孩子,或者小动物上以little修饰.当然如果另有它意当我说错.
fall down里的fall不是过去式,但是下一句说狗搭乘火车又是过去时,应该是统一吧.
她如果是在这场意外中摔倒的,应该用in 不是with,没有with的说法.
应该是take a train吧 它是去坐火车吧,
master用作主人感觉好别扭,不过也没有什么大错,貌似很多字典都这么用的.
最后是finally,不是final,这是形容词性,不能拿来做句子开头.
通篇目前就这些问题,但主要问题是完全看不懂啥意思.