短文改错Mr.Wang is our physics teacher.At beginning of hislesson this morningMr.Wang is our physics teacher.At beginning of hislesson this morning ,he made some of us giving a report on ang subject of our choice.When itwa Li Ming's turn,she told

短文改错Mr.Wang is our physics teacher.At beginning of hislesson this morningMr.Wang is our physics teacher.At beginning of hislesson this morning ,he made some of us giving a report on ang subject of our choice.When itwa Li Ming's turn,she told
短文改错Mr.Wang is our physics teacher.At beginning of hislesson this morning
Mr.Wang is our physics teacher.At beginning of hislesson this morning ,he made some of us giving a report on ang subject of our choice.When itwa Li Ming's turn,she told us abouthis elder brother which was a local worker.But dring the report,his eyes were staring at the worid map on the wall all the time.Mr.Wang knew that Li Ming doesn't look at the audience because of he was nervous.He said to Li Ming jokingly,"Both of us can see you miss your brother very much.But is he O.K.in South America?" Everyone immediate laughed,including Li Ming,Li Ming finally became relaxing.

短文改错Mr.Wang is our physics teacher.At beginning of hislesson this morningMr.Wang is our physics teacher.At beginning of hislesson this morning ,he made some of us giving a report on ang subject of our choice.When itwa Li Ming's turn,she told
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Mr.Wang is our physics teacher.At (加入the) beginning of his lesson this morning,he made some of us (giving改成give) a report on any subject of our choice.When it was Li Ming's turn,(she改成he) told us about his elder brother (which改成who) was a local worker.But during the report,his eyes were staring at the world map on the wall all the time.Mr.Wang knew that Li Ming (doesn't改成didn't) look at the audience because (去掉of) he was nervous.He said to Li Ming jokingly,"(Both改成All) of us can see you miss your brother very much.(But改成And) is he O.K.in South America?" Everyone (immediate改成immediately) laughed,including Li Ming.Li Ming finally became (relaxing改成relaxed).
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