【紧急】各位英语达人,帮我检查下这些句子有什么错误么?帮我改一下,明天外语口试要用,My name is ,I come from nanchang tenth middle school.I like reading novels and magazines,I don't like sports Because I am some lazy

【紧急】各位英语达人,帮我检查下这些句子有什么错误么?帮我改一下,明天外语口试要用,My name is ,I come from nanchang tenth middle school.I like reading novels and magazines,I don't like sports Because I am some lazy
【紧急】各位英语达人,帮我检查下这些句子有什么错误么?帮我改一下,明天外语口试要用,
My name is ,I come from nanchang tenth middle school.I like reading novels and magazines,I don't like sports Because I am some lazy ,and I hate sweating sensations.I'm a friendly person.I always try to be polite.I like to get along with everyone.（一段关于自己的简介：我叫XXX,我来自XX市的第十中学.我喜欢阅读小说和杂志,我不喜欢运动,因为我有些懒,并且我讨厌出汗时的感觉.我是一个友好的人,我试图对每个人礼貌,我喜欢与每个人相处）
I'm not disability,it's an accident,in school sports meeting,my leg get injured in the jumping game,therefore,I have to do the surgery,and live for a long time in the hospital
Sometimes a little bit painful bones sword-boat,yet
我不是残疾,只是一个意外事故,在学校运动会时我参加跳远比赛时摔断了腿,为此,我还做了手术,并且,在医院住了很长一段时间
有时还会有一点痛,应为骨头还没长好
I think that English is a useful language,it is the world's most widely used languages used in the world,English is a very important communication tool.English can help us understand with more foreign knowledge,so I appreciate English
我认为,英语是一个很有用的语言,它是世界上运用最广泛的语言,英语在世界上是一个很重要的交流工具.英语能帮助我们了解跟多的外国知识,所以我很欣赏英语
觉得不好的或错了的地方帮我改下,觉得有必要加点的也帮我加下,小女子感激不尽!这是我用有道中翻英出来的,感觉好中文化哦,有蛮多地方觉得不对头的,对我帮助大回答的还会在加分的,
P.S.鄙视度娘,居然把我的问题吞了,在回答一次吧,分值还是一样的.明天下午就要考了.快点吧今天过后没人回答,我就死定了!
都很及时,并且有很大的帮助,我实在不知道选谁,所以我只有发起投票了哈,大家不要怪我

【紧急】各位英语达人,帮我检查下这些句子有什么错误么?帮我改一下,明天外语口试要用,My name is ,I come from nanchang tenth middle school.I like reading novels and magazines,I don't like sports Because I am some lazy
My name is , I come from tenth middle school of nanchang.I like reading novels and magazines, I don't like sports Because I am a little lazy , and I hate sweating . I'm a friendly person.I always try to be polite. I like getting along with everyone.
I'm not a disabled girl, it was in school sports meeting that my leg was injured in the jumping game, therefore, I had to be given the surgery, I stayed in the hospital for a long time
Sometimes it hurts a little bit because the bones have not recovered yet.
I think that English is a useful language that is being used most widely in the world, meanwhile,English is a very important communication tool. English can help us understand more foreign knowledge, so I appreciate English