这个英语长句怎么修改In this letter,by offering their new faculty’s spouse a job,imitated a decision made by Bronson College (BC),the president of Pierce University (PU) concludes that such decision will attract most gifted teachers and re

这个英语长句怎么修改In this letter,by offering their new faculty’s spouse a job,imitated a decision made by Bronson College (BC),the president of Pierce University (PU) concludes that such decision will attract most gifted teachers and re
这个英语长句怎么修改
In this letter,by offering their new faculty’s spouse a job,imitated a decision made by Bronson College (BC),the president of Pierce University (PU) concludes that such decision will attract most gifted teachers and researchers to PU and improve the moral of PU’s staff.
上面这个句子我觉得插入语imitated a decision made by Bronson College (BC),这样的话应该是缺少了主语.但是想保留这样的语序.不知道如何修改.
这个长句想表达的意思是“PU的president想通过给员工的配偶找工作来吸引gifted teacher 而这个想法首先是BC想出来的”
我想首先强调这个decision 然后用一个从句 解释一下这个decision 是首先由BC想出来的.

这个英语长句怎么修改In this letter,by offering their new faculty’s spouse a job,imitated a decision made by Bronson College (BC),the president of Pierce University (PU) concludes that such decision will attract most gifted teachers and re
by offering their new faclty's spouse a job -- a new initiative first adopted by BC -- the president of ...

The president of Pierce University (PU) concludes that the decision of offering a job to the spouse of their new faculty staff, as initiated by Bronson College (BC), would attract most gifted teachers and researchers to PU and improve the moral of PU’s staff.

This letter,offering their new faculty’s spouse a job, imitated a decision made by Bronson College (BC), the president of Pierce University (PU) concluded that such decision wolud attract most gifted ...

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This letter,offering their new faculty’s spouse a job, imitated a decision made by Bronson College (BC), the president of Pierce University (PU) concluded that such decision wolud attract most gifted teachers and researchers to PU and improve the moral of PU’s staff.
通篇的时态应为一般过去，This letter,offering their new faculty’s spouse a job, imitated a decision made by Bronson College (BC), 这句话，用一个非谓语动词来修饰“letter”，“imitat”作谓语就比较妥当了。

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