麻烦大家帮我检查一下以下英语作文有无语法错误The sentiment after read Today I read a book called .The book was a story about a girl called Sara Crewe.Sara Crewe was an India.She was only seven years old and she had long black hai

麻烦大家帮我检查一下以下英语作文有无语法错误The sentiment after read Today I read a book called .The book was a story about a girl called Sara Crewe.Sara Crewe was an India.She was only seven years old and she had long black hai
麻烦大家帮我检查一下以下英语作文有无语法错误
The sentiment after read
Today I read a book called .
The book was a story about a girl called Sara Crewe.Sara Crewe was an India.She was only seven years old and she had long black hair and green eyes.Her father was a rich man called Ralph Crewe.On a cold winter day,her father Mr.Crewe and Sara Crewe left India arrived in London.Then Mr.Crewe brought Sara to Miss Minchin’s school,and then he went back to India and work.
Sara lived happily with her friends at Miss Minchin’s school.Three years later.One day,Sara had an exciting letter from Mr.Crewe.Mr.Crewe told Sara his friend had some mines in northern India,and a month ago his workers found diamonds there,and he put all his money into his friend’s diamond mines for get diamonds out.But some months later ,on Sara’s eleventh birthday,Miss Minchin’s lawyer told her ,there are no diamond mines ,Mr.Crewe’s good friend ran away with all Mr.Crewe ‘s money .Ralph Crewe was ill with a fever ,and when he heard about this ,he got worse .A week later he was dead.When Miss Minchin knows these things,she was thunder stricken.And then she told Sara all the things about Mr.Crewe,and make Sara to be a servant.Sara’s new life was very hard.But Sara always told herself ‘I must brave.’ But two years later,the magic happened.Mr.Crewe’s friend ,Mr.Carmichael find Sara .And tell Sara the true story about her father’s friend and the diamond mines ,and the two years of looking for Ralph Crewe’s daughter .Formerly,at first they didn’t find any diamonds,and all Ralph’s money was gone.Mr Carmichael was afraid to tell him,so he ran away.And later,when they did find diamonds,Ralph was dead.And now,Sara was rich again,she was a princess,a real princess.
After read the book,I know several lessons .The first one is if the life is hard,we can not afraid,we must envisage to it bravely.Because if you afraid and think the life will be more and harder,you will can’t to work hard and change the real-life .The second one is money isn’t the most important thing,although you are poor,but your life can be very happy as well.I should learn from Sara.When she know her dead was dead,she have to be a servant,she told to herself ‘I must brave.’ at all times.And she tries to make her life more interesting.And the third one is ‘Prosperity makes friends,adversity tries them.Some of Sara’s friends left Sara by reason of Sara was poor,she was a servant.But at the same time,Sara found several genuine friends.The last one is Follow your own course,and let people talk.

麻烦大家帮我检查一下以下英语作文有无语法错误The sentiment after read Today I read a book called .The book was a story about a girl called Sara Crewe.Sara Crewe was an India.She was only seven years old and she had long black hai
情绪后,改为小
我今天看了一本书,叫什么 .
这本书的故事:有一个女孩子叫萨拉克鲁.萨拉克鲁是印度.她只有7岁,她长长的黑发绿眼.她的父亲是一个富有的人叫拉尔夫的开销.一个寒冷的冬日,她的父亲克鲁先生和萨拉克鲁离开印度抵达伦敦.然后克鲁先生带来萨拉吴明钦的学校,然后他回到印度工作.
萨拉过着幸福与友人吴明钦的学校.三年后.一天,萨拉了一个令人振奋的来信克鲁先生.克鲁先生萨拉告诉他的朋友有一些地雷,在印度北部,并在一个月前,他的工作,发现有钻石,他把所有的钱变成他的朋友的钻石矿为get出钻石.但数月后,对萨拉的11岁生日,吴明钦的律师告诉她,有没有钻石矿,克鲁先生的好朋友就跑所有克鲁先生的钱.拉尔夫克鲁是生病了发烧,当他听到这个,他变得更糟.一个星期后,他死了.当吴明钦知道这些事情,她被雷电袭击.然后她告诉萨拉所有东西克鲁先生,使萨拉是一个仆人.萨拉的新生活也非常艰难.萨拉,但总是告诉自己'我要勇敢的.但两年后,神奇的事.克鲁先生的朋友,卡迈克尔先生寻找萨拉.并告诉萨拉真实故事,她父亲的朋友和钻石矿,并在两年找拉尔夫克鲁的女儿.原来,他们当初并没有找到钻石,而所有拉尔夫的钱gone.mr卡迈克尔害怕告诉他,于是他就跑了.后来,当他们发现有钻石,拉尔夫死了.现在,萨拉被再次丰富,她是一个公主,一个真正的公主.
后阅读这本书,我知道了一些经验.其一是,如果人生是艰苦,我们不能害怕,我们必须设想它的勇敢.因为如果你害怕,觉得生活会越来越艰难,你将不能向辛勤工作,改变现实生活.第二个是,钱不是最重要的事情,虽然你是穷人,但你的生命可以很开心.我要学习,从萨拉.当她知道她的死是死,她是一个仆人,她告诉自己'我要勇敢的. '在,无时不在.她试图让她的生活更有趣.和第三个是'繁荣,使朋友,逆境,他们尝试.一些萨拉的朋友离开萨拉因萨拉穷,她是一个仆人.但与此同时,萨拉发现几个真正的朋友.最后一个是走自己的路,让别人去说吧.
还不错!就是有几个词...