帮我检查一下这几篇短文中有没有语法错误,拼写错误,意思不通等一（I was born in Tianjin.It’s in the north of China.There are nine rivers through the city.The most famous river is Haihe.It’s a beautiful river.You can take

帮我检查一下这几篇短文中有没有语法错误,拼写错误,意思不通等一（I was born in Tianjin.It’s in the north of China.There are nine rivers through the city.The most famous river is Haihe.It’s a beautiful river.You can take
帮我检查一下这几篇短文中有没有语法错误,拼写错误,意思不通等
一（I was born in Tianjin.It’s in the north of China.There are nine rivers through the city.The most famous river is Haihe.It’s a beautiful river.You can take a boat along the river and see the beautiful view.People in Tianjin are very friendly and kind.Tianjin is famous for Food Street.You can taste lots of delicious food in the Food Street .Gu Wen Hua Jie is also famous.you can buy a lot of things in this street.Welcome to Tianjin.There is a lot of interesting places to visit.）
二（Thank you for you letter.Now I’d like to tell you something about mid-autumn day.It’s on the 15th august.Every year when the holiday comes.We will have one day off.We will eat moon cake.It’s a very delicious food.We also gou out for a walk to see the round moon in the evening.Many family will get together and have a big meal.We will enjoy ourselves in that day.It’s a interesting holiday.）
三 还有这篇（I will spend my summer holiday in Beijing.It is the capital city of china.There are a lot of famous and interesting places.The most famous place is the great wall.It is very beautiful.I want to climb up to it first.Then I will visit the Forbidden City.I also want to visit Bei Hai park.If the is clear I will climb up to baita and see the whole park.
I will stay there for two days.I think it would be a wonderful holiday.）

帮我检查一下这几篇短文中有没有语法错误,拼写错误,意思不通等一（I was born in Tianjin.It’s in the north of China.There are nine rivers through the city.The most famous river is Haihe.It’s a beautiful river.You can take
You can take a boat along the river--take boat along
You can taste lots of delicious food --you can enjoy更好
There is a lot of interesting places to visit--there are
mid-autumn day...Mid-autumn Festival
on the 15th august.应该是on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month
It’s a very delicious food.--It’s very delicious.
gou out --go out
in that day.--on that day
a interesting holiday--an interesting holiday

...rivers going through the city...There are a lot of places of interest...
删掉Every year when the holiday comes和前面一句是重复表达。

一（I was born in Tianjin. It’s in the north of China. There are nine rivers through the city. The most famous river is Haihe. It’s a beautiful river. You can take a boat along the river and see the bea...

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一（I was born in Tianjin. It’s in the north of China. There are nine rivers through the city. The most famous river is Haihe. It’s a beautiful river. You can take a boat along the river and see the beautiful view. People in Tianjin are very friendly and kind. Tianjin is famous for Food Street. You can taste lots of delicious food in the Food Street .Gu Wen Hua Jie is also famous. you can buy a lot of things in this street. Welcome to Tianjin. There is (are)a lot of interesting places to visit.）
二（Thank you for you letter. Now I’d like to tell you something about mid-autumn day. It’s on the 15th august. （应该是August 15th）Every year when the holiday comes. We will have one day off. We will eat moon cake. It’s a (加kind of)very delicious food.We also go out for a walk to see the round moon in the evening. Many family (families)will get together and have a big meal. We will enjoy ourselves in (on)that day. It’s a (an)interesting holiday. ）
绝对是正确的！！！

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Tianjin is famous for Food Street. 最好改为 for the Food Street
Gu Wen Hua Jie 这个不能用英文来表示么 读起来挺怪的
There is a lot of interesting places to visit.
语法错误 there are.
Thank you for you letter. N...

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Tianjin is famous for Food Street. 最好改为 for the Food Street
Gu Wen Hua Jie 这个不能用英文来表示么 读起来挺怪的
There is a lot of interesting places to visit.
语法错误 there are.
Thank you for you letter. Now I’d like to tell you something about (the)mid-autumn day
15th august 不符合外国人的写作习惯 应为 August 15th
We will enjoy ourselves in that day. 改为on that day
最后一句应该是an interseting holiday

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You can take a boat along the river--take boat along
You can taste lots of delicious food --you can enjoy更好