英语改错 十处错误My family and i move to the US in 2003 from West Africa.In our first week in the US,they were walking towards a park when an American family went past to us .Their little boy said “Hi”to us when we got closely.We had no i

英语改错 十处错误My family and i move to the US in 2003 from West Africa.In our first week in the US,they were walking towards a park when an American family went past to us .Their little boy said “Hi”to us when we got closely.We had no i
英语改错 十处错误
My family and i move to the US in 2003 from West Africa.In our first week in the US,they were walking towards a park when an American family went past to us .Their little boy said “Hi”to us when we got closely.We had no idea when to say.We did not know what "Hi" meant at that time .We decide to say "Hi" back,not know if it was the right thing to do.Anyway,few days later,we learned that it was the right thing to do .And since that time,we have formed the habit in saying "Hi"to friends,colleagues,and neighbor as well.

英语改错 十处错误My family and i move to the US in 2003 from West Africa.In our first week in the US,they were walking towards a park when an American family went past to us .Their little boy said “Hi”to us when we got closely.We had no i
My family and i move(moved后面有具体的时间,要用过去时) to the US in 2003 from West Africa.In our first week in the US,they(we,后面是us,所以这里的主语应该是we) were walking towards a park when an American family went past to（去掉to,go past后面直接跟宾语,路过我们） us .Their little boy said “Hi”to us when(then这里时间有先后,要用then,表示然后) we got closely.We had no idea when(what,不知道说什么,要用what) to say.We did not know what "Hi" meant at that time .We decide(decided,要用过去时) to say "Hi" back,not know(knowing,现在分词短语作伴随状语) if it was the right thing to do.Anyway,few(a few,few是表示否定,这里要用a few 表示几天后) days later,we learned that it was the right thing to do .And since that time,we have formed the habit in(of,form the habit of doing：形成...的习惯) saying "Hi"to friends,colleagues,and neighbor(neighbors要用复数) as well.

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1.My family and i 改为My family。2. move 改为 moved。3.In our first week 中In改为At。4.第三行got改为went。5.We had no idea when to say中when改为what